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Reviews For For Love of Family

Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 05:35PM Title: 41: Epilogue

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Great ending to an extraordinary story.

Author's Response: Thank you for every one of your comments. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 04:01PM Title: 40: Conclusions

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Harry learning to walk again is wonderful for all of them. Any kind of disability or serious chronic illness is so hard on every member of the family.

Author's Response: Harry needed a happy ending to his ordeal. He will never walk like he did before the accident, but now he has the freedom to choose whether he walks or rides.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 03:38PM Title: 39: Auction

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Amazing party. I have always been curious about the Galleons to pounds exchange rate. Nice ending as well.

Author's Response: I've actually been to events like this auction that raised lots of money like Ginny's did and they're pretty spectacular. If you go to Harry Potter Wikia, there's an article about Wizarding money its equivalents in British pounds.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 03:12PM Title: 38: Defence

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What a relief that she was found guilty so quickly. Even the Wizengamot could not mess that case up.

Author's Response: When the Matron showed her twisted personality in all its glory, the unanimous vote was the only logical conclusion.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 02:37PM Title: 37: Prosecution

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Well written description of the trial. I am eager to read more.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 02:18PM Title: 36: Homecoming

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Great chapter. Everyone should have such good friends.

Author's Response: Friends are our support system away from family and the students of Hogwarts know how to rise to the occasion when they're needed.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 01:26PM Title: 35: Firsts

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It is good to read about them all recovering and moving on. This chapter made me so hungry for fish and chips dripping in malt vinegar.

Author's Response: I made myself hungry for that particular meal while writing the chapter. As Ron puts it, a bit of grease never hurt anyone and it certainly made Harry happy.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 08:09AM Title: 34: Memory

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The penseive use was a good idea for how to help Scorpius with his captivity. I like the way you are having your characters need some kind of therapy to handle the horrible experiences they are having. That was always lacking in the books, and Harry especially should have had some kind of therapy over the years.

Author's Response: You hit the nail on the head with your comment about the books. However, it is my understanding of British culture that it's still frowned upon to actually need psychological therapy. That's why it took Ginny so long to seek help for herself. As for Scorpius, I rather thought using the Pensieve would be the best possible way to keep him out of a psychologist's office. Thanks for your comments.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.29 - 08:14PM Title: 33: Night-watch

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Good to see Hermione so much in this chapter. She is really kind and helpful in a practical way with Ron's friend from the Auror office.

Author's Response: Hermione understands that Brodie has been so wrapped up in the investigation for so long that he hasn't really allowed himself to grieve. She also knows that he's been alone much of the time and hasn't had anyone take care of him. Just a little kindness will go a long way to soothe his battered soul.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.29 - 06:52PM Title: 32: Battle

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Glad the rescue mission is over. Hopefully everyone will recover from their ordeals and the Matron will rot for eternity.

Author's Response: The Matron will rot after everyone finds out the reasons for her reign of terror. It will take time, but I predict that most characters in this story will have a happy ending.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.29 - 07:04AM Title: 31: Solace

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So glad that Scorpius is finally safe. Looking forward to the reunion with his loved ones, and to that sick, twisted woman hopefully getting exactly what she deserves.

Author's Response: It's a relief for all involved that Scorpius is now safe and surrounded by people who will help him recover, at least physically. His reunion with his family will be next chapter. Keep reading...



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.29 - 06:26AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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This plan seems rather dangerous for Scorpius. Hope it works out.

Author's Response: It's dangerous for everyone, but if they want to catch the Matron and her toadies, they're going to have to take some risks. Keep reading. You'll find out what's coming when you get there.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.28 - 05:15PM Title: 28: Resourcefulness

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Glad the aurors are making progress in their search for Scorpius. He did so well getting out a patronus message. Hopefully they will be able to rescue him soon. I am rather looking forward to his reunion with Rose, and to Ron's reaction.

Author's Response: You won't be disappointed with either Scorpius' rescue by the Aurors or with his reunion with Rose. He's a very brave lad who is lucky enough to be surrounded by friends after he returns to Hogwarts. In the meantime, his successful casting of the Patronus Charm has helped the Aurors immensely and will help Ron's team with apprehending their prime suspect. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.27 - 05:28PM Title: 27: Preparation

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I really hope that Scorpius manages to escape soon. His situation is so horrible right now. Glad Ginny is seeking help.It is always hard to admit that you cannot handle something.

Author's Response: Like you said in another review, Ginny is an amazing woman and while she's feeling better about herself and her role in the family, she knew she could be even better if she took some "me time" to do something for herself. As for Scorpius, he, too, is a resourceful young man and even as scared as he is, he will be able to think clearly and figure out how to help himself. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.26 - 07:44PM Title: 26: Torment

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Glad to see that Harry and Ginny are with Draco and Astoria at this time. The fear they must feel is incomprehensible as they wait for news of their son.

Author's Response: Draco and Asteria have lived quietly, relying only on each other for support, because of what he did during the war. Ginny and Harry realize this and understand that the Malfoys won't ask for help, since they don't expect to get any. Therefore, the Potters are willing to freely give the Malfoys the support they need to endure this horrible time. It's not quite Harry's "saving people thing," but its very close and I think Draco and Asteria are grateful for it.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.26 - 07:21PM Title: 25: Execution

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These people are so horrific. I hope Scorpius will be rescued before too much damage is done.

Author's Response: The Matron is a twisted, bitter and unbalanced individual who let the desire for revenge take over practical thinking. Scorpius' kidnapping is meant to teach Draco a lesson for talking to Harry about what he's seen.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.26 - 07:01PM Title: 24: Mischief

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Good for Ginny. She is a truly amazing woman.

Author's Response: Ginny wants what's best for herself and her family. She's not going to rest until she gets it, even if it's admitting she needs help coping. And yes, I agree that she's amazing.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.26 - 06:34PM Title: 23: Plans

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Good to read some positive changes in Harry's medical situation.

Author's Response: It's about time he had something good happen to him. A person can only take so much. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.26 - 02:17PM Title: 22: Troubles

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Frightful ending.

Author's Response: The Matron is truly a despicable character. She has a lot more up her sleeve as far as her "volunteers" and "employees" are concerned, as well as her main victim. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.25 - 07:50PM Title: 21: Reparations

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Glad to see that things are looking up for Harry and Ginny. They really deserve to have a happily ever after.

Author's Response: "Happily ever after" is what they're aiming for and eventually, they just might get it. Keep reading. Their story just gets better.




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