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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2016.01.25 - 05:15PM
Title: 18: Christmas
Leaving us with a slight cliffhanger. I wish that Ginny had taken the time to tell someone where she was going.
Author's Response: Ginny isn't thinking rationally and is mostly focused on herself and what she's feeling at the moment. She's overwhelmed by her realization that she's not happy or at peace with what she's discovered about herself and she just needs to find an outlet for these feelings or she'll explode. There will be more about her reasons for leaving in the next couple of chapters.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2012.05.06 - 09:37PM
Title: 18: Christmas
I hope Harry gets a warning to Draco in time and that he heeds it. I certainly don't like the thought of someone lurking at the burrow...would they attack any of the youngsters? Now Ron is in danger too...
Author's Response: As an Auror, Ron is constantly in danger, especially when he's out and about in London; he's just been trained to be alert and to know how to stay safe, just as Harry has been. And yes, when Harry says he will warn Draco, he will do so in a timely manner. As for the lurker at the Burrow, he can't do much with all the enchantments Harry, Ron, Bill and Arthur have placed on the place over the years. As long as they stay within the grounds of the estate, they will be safe from intruders like the one lurking in the woods surrounding the estate.
Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed
Date: 2011.08.06 - 10:43PM
Title: 18: Christmas
No Review
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the stars.
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed
Date: 2011.08.05 - 01:20PM
Title: 18: Christmas
The Matron is so incredibly sick and twisted. In some ways, she is almost worse than Voldemort. BTW, in my last review, I meant to say I was surprised they didn't do more to prepare for Harry's arrival. I obviously typed too fast. Poor Ginny, however, leaving without telling anyone is not going to go over well.... Glad Ron and Harry could have a good heart to heart talk, despite how awkward it was. Nice job.
Author's Response: Yes, the Matron is certainly deranged. I hadn't thought about her in quite that context, but it does make sense. I've been thinking about why Molly and Arthur wouldn't do more before Harry's arrival at The Burrow and the only reason I can come up with is that Ginny wanted to do it all herself so she wouldn't tell anyone what the specific spells were for doing things like widening doorways. Again, she could have asked for help and it would have been given... Ron and Harry really haven't had time for such a talk since Harry was hurt due to lack of privacy and Ron taking over the investigation. I think he needed it as much as Harry. Glad you liked the chapter. See you next Thursday...
Reviewer: RSS Signed
Date: 2011.08.05 - 07:36AM
Title: 18: Christmas
I love reading your chapters on Thursdays, too. Great work as always.
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you can see where your comments and criticisms have improved the tale. I really appreciate your help.
Reviewer: GoDons Signed
Date: 2011.08.05 - 06:24AM
Title: 18: Christmas
No Review
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and thanks for the stars.
Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed
Date: 2011.08.05 - 04:51AM
Title: 18: Christmas
Winding it up soon, I'd guess. This has been an exceptionally well plotted and written fic, with not too many evil cliffies.
Author's Response: Actually there are at least fifteen more chapters, so the story is not going to end as soon as you think. I'm glad you think I'm not ending my chapters with lots of cliffies. I'm quite conscious about that because even though I want my readers to return to find out what happens next, I don't like leaving them on edge about it either. Until next Thursday...
Reviewer: sidnandragin Signed
Date: 2011.08.05 - 01:31AM
Title: 18: Christmas
Aw no! I cannot take anymore hurting going on. I am now worried for Draco, his family and the family at the Burrow. No more, I cannot take it! Obviously, I am getting to close to the story. Tell me that it is ending soon and capture is close at hand!
Author's Response: It's good that you're becoming close to the story. That tells me I'm doing a good job of telling the story. I won't promise not to hurt more people, but I won't promise to hurt them either. So far, there are another fifteen chapters, so we're nowhere near the end of this tale. Keep reading. I look forward to your next Thursday's review. Until then...
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2011.08.04 - 11:17PM
Title: 18: Christmas
Oh no... you had to end it there. Did Ginny deactivated the protective charms around the Burrow when she disapparated
What is going to happen to poor Draco
Where on earth is Ginny going at this time of the year
What a story. Love your detailed description of the landscape.
Author's Response: Tha answers to your concerns will all be dealt with in future chapters. Thanks for reading. I'll see you next Thursday.
Reviewer: ladyginny89 Signed
Date: 2011.08.04 - 05:07PM
Title: 18: Christmas
Awesome Chapter! Harry and Ron talking about hHarry and Ginny's "intimate" life was pretty funny! The reaction was very Ron-like! :P As for Ginny, I think she is very overwhelmed and that if she and Harry really don't have a good heart to heart soon, that something is going to happen to her and Harry is going to blame himself like always. I wonder what Ginny is up to! I can't wait until next week!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The end of the Harry/Ron conversation was fun to write, just because both of them were so uncomfortable with the subject matter. You're right about Ginny. The next couple of chapters deals with her emotional crisis. Next Thursday will roll around faster than you think. Until then...
Reviewer: HitokiriChapin Signed
Date: 2011.08.04 - 02:07PM
Title: 18: Christmas
Damn I wish tomorrow was Thursday again. Great chapter. I can't wait to see how Ginny deals with her issues. KUTGW!
Author's Response: Actually, Thursdays roll around rather quickly, I'm finding. The next two chapters deal with Ginny and her issues and also how her family deals with her absense. I'm glad you seem to want Thursday to come tomorrow. Until next week...
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2011.08.04 - 01:30PM
Title: 18: Christmas
Christmas comes on Thursdays. What was the last paragraph about?
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think Christmas comes on Thursdays! You made me smile with that comment. Anyway, the last paragraph centers on how Ginny is really feeling about herself, how she suddenly feels like she has no purpose in life any more: Harry has rehabilitated enough that he doesn't need her 24/7 and is doing just fine fending for himself most of the time. So, instead of feeling happy about it she feels useless and sad. That's why she decides to leave, so that she can sort out why she feels this way all of a sudden. Does that make sense? I hope so... See you next Christmas... erm... Thursday.
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