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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2018.06.20 - 06:13PM
Title: Chapter 1 Forgotten
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Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2018.06.11 - 04:29AM
Title: Chapter 1 Forgotten
Awwwww....Whatcan Isay? This is just raw emotion.
Author's Response: Ginny sure was put through quite a roller coaster of emotions in that chapter.
Reviewer: 1OldHPFan Signed
Date: 2011.05.22 - 11:37AM
Title: Chapter 1 Forgotten
I've missed you and now this.
It was a good story and it explains a lot from the first chapter of "After the Horcrux".
Her smacking him with the roses was classic.
I must also add that the last SIYE challenge had me divided, as both entrants are two of my favorite fanfic writers.
Thanks again
Author's Response: Hey, I have been thinking about what to do next. I want to rewrite After the Horcrux. As I was writing the last few chapter, I went back to reread and the first two chapters. I didn't like them, so I want to rewrite it. The other site has made it difficult to rewrite it. So I am here.
There is still a chapter to this prequel, so Ginny will have even more reasons to get angry at Harry.
Manwe
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2011.05.19 - 08:22AM
Title: Chapter 1 Forgotten
Good story. Very descriptive.
Next chapter should be interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2011.05.13 - 01:06PM
Title: Chapter 1 Forgotten
I wish you had started this as the first chapter of "After the Horcrux", because it makes more sense in a linear timeline than as two stories. Still good though!
Author's Response: This is actually just one chapter of this "two chapter one-shot". The next chapter will take the reader up to the time that Ginny and Harry meet in chapter one of After the Horcrux. Timeline it would be correct to make this the first chapter of After the Horcrux, but for shock it was better this way.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2011.05.13 - 10:37AM
Title: Chapter 1 Forgotten
Wonderful battle action! The emotional content of this scene makes it gripping. I love Arthur's calm demeanor and really feel for Ginny at the end when she thinks she's been forgotten by Harry. Well done. I give this first chapter two thumbs up for making me want to read both stories from start to finish.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy both stories.
Manwe
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