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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.01.10 - 01:43PM Title: Chapter Three: Like the sands of time

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Poor Luna. I always remember that she was kidnapped, but to be honest, in this chapter I was somehow surprised and had to roll my eyes about myself that I forgot. I was so focused on Ginny that Luna's fate slipped my mind for a moment.

I admit that I was a wee bit surprised that Ginny didn't tell her mother yet, and then the thought crossed my mind that you want to keep the secret as long as possible to remain in accordance with the books, even if the story is marked AU. Sneaky author she is.

Author's Response: Yes, I know, but I wanted to write this story within the constraints of HBP as best as I could, and also because, in my mind, Ginny has kept this secret because she's so scared for Harry and her family that she truly believes that it is for the best.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.10.01 - 07:27PM Title: Chapter Three: Like the sands of time

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Very short chapter, but interesting changes. I'm glad they're going to Muriel's now. Can't wait to find out what caused the changes.

Author's Response: Thanks, next chapter will be up shortly :)



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2013.09.26 - 04:43AM Title: Chapter Three: Like the sands of time

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really dislike cliff hangers (yeah, I know, me and about 99.9% of your readers ;) )

ILG

Author's Response: Lol, I hate reading cliffhangers too, but next chapter will be up soon :)



Reviewer: Manatoc Fox Signed Date: 2013.09.13 - 09:14AM Title: Chapter Three: Like the sands of time

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Definitely a big fan. I can't wait to see how Muriel reacts. I think she should be the one to discover the secret. After all, Ginny is 4 months or so along now. Can't be hiding it much longer. Well done. I really enjoy this story.

Author's Response: Muriel isn't the one who finds out initially in the next chapter, but I have got a scene with her coming up in chapter five when she does find out. Thanks for the review and stars! :)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2013.09.08 - 09:35AM Title: Chapter Three: Like the sands of time

if there was a good time to tell molly THAT WAS IT....ginny neededs to tell someone else beside promfrey because now it looks like she is not going back to school....but soon its going to show that ginny is eating more then normal and not showing it if the right spots.....kutgw

Author's Response: I agree with you completly, but I promise that the secret is out in the next chapter :)




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