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Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.02.07 - 01:45AM Title: Chapter Five: And When It All Started Coming Undone

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Very nasty cliffs! Hope you get them beyond this!

Author's Response: Ha ha I was nasty wasn't I! :)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.01.10 - 02:45PM Title: Chapter Five: And When It All Started Coming Undone

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Brilliant chapter...and some nice deviations from the books, I loved it.

That's what I call keeping a secret, Ginny must have been overdue since a week and Molly still hasn't a clue, lol. That's almost like the wife of my neighbour. She was hospitalized with suspected appendicitis and the day after she got her son. I'd bet Molly was as surprised, as the mother of my neighbour back then.

I just hope that Harry will behave differently than in the books when he ignored Ginny after the battle and didn't even care to ask if she was hurt.


Author's Response: Wow, that really must have been a shock for her! And I too didn't like how he didn't ask how Ginny was, all we had was a paltry line of they would have plenty of time later



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2018.01.09 - 07:14PM Title: Chapter Five: And When It All Started Coming Undone

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Author's Response: Thanks for the stars :)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.01.09 - 05:03AM Title: Chapter Five: And When It All Started Coming Undone

H Ginny made it to term as well as the end of the battle....Im not sure Ginny would have stayed behind if she was only a few months in but at the end ....made the right choice...kutgw

Author's Response: Yes, I agree. I thought long and hard about that when writing it. I really wanted Ginny at Hogwarts so I could still include Molly's "not my daughter, you bitch" duel with Bellatrix, but I thought it was too stupid of Ginny to insist on going as in the book and ending up out of the Room of Requirement, hence how I wrote it. Next chapter up in a day or two.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.01.08 - 06:28PM Title: Chapter Five: And When It All Started Coming Undone

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Crikey it's great to see this new chapter! Can't wait to see the rest! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you! I know, it's been a ridiculously long time but I really do want to finish it. Next chapter is ready to go and will be posted in a day or two. :)




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