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Reviews For The Commoner Queen

Reviewer: swede Signed Date: 2012.04.27 - 03:25PM Title: Prologue

Aaand my review was truncated due to me using special characters. Damn. Oh well.
This: So the sentence actually says "...making my , my grandparents..." .
Should have been: So the sentence actually says “…making my father’s father and mother’s mother, my grandparents…”



Reviewer: GMWP Signed Date: 2011.10.11 - 05:56AM Title: Prologue

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I'm loving this story. Found it yesterday and couldn't stop reading. It's very original, something there is lack off in the HP fanfic fandom IMO. please keep it up. I'm really curious to know how their relationship progresses.

Author's Response: Thank youuu! :D



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.07.12 - 05:04AM Title: Prologue

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This story has got me intrigued. The start is quite interesting. I am looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Good Luck.

Author's Response: glad you're liking it :D



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2011.07.12 - 12:51AM Title: Prologue

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A cute beginning. I'm looking forward to more. By the way, you and your beta are correct about what to capitalize and what not to when it comes to titles.

Author's Response: Cute! Love that word! I'm glad me and Amelie got it right! :D



Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2011.07.11 - 11:13PM Title: Prologue

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A little short yet still interesting. looking forward to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Short! Yes, I know :S It's one of my many troubles writting, short chapters!! But this story is probably going to always be along those lines, I'm afraid...it's that kinda story, you know? :D



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.07.11 - 02:12PM Title: Prologue

Interesting beginning. Looking forward to seeing how things unfold. I don't like the fact that Ginny is divorced - just seems to wrong, but the premise is definitely different and intriguing. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yeah, everyone seems to be having trouble with the divorced Ginny but it's a part of who she is, like i will explain later on...I think it's very possible that Ginny, without Harry in her life, might have done something stupid like that.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.07.11 - 09:55AM Title: Prologue

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it's still a H/G story, just a bit more AU than usual, and I love AU fics so... keep up the good work

Author's Response: AU ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!!!!!! :D



Reviewer: AoiKazeToMidoriAme Signed Date: 2011.07.10 - 04:34PM Title: Prologue

I haven't really seen enough to make a judgement on the story overall, but I wouldn't worry too much about it not being HP. It is a H/G AU fic for sure, but I for one happen to love AU fics the best when they are done just right. When they center around the characters. Keep writing, and i hope this story turns out great.

Author's Response: HG for sure! Just completely AU...I also hope it turns out great and that you'll continue reading :P



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.07.10 - 10:58AM Title: Prologue

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Certainly a very different sort of story. I like the style but not the number of divorces. I will hang in there to see what develops.

Author's Response: Divorces...only Ginny's really...Harry is NOT divorced, I hope you'll hang there, thought :D



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2011.07.10 - 03:05AM Title: Prologue

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Interesting beginning. Can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: I'll make sure you get more! :D



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2011.07.09 - 11:47PM Title: Prologue

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Harry and Ginny are here, so this is a Harry-Ginny story.

Author's Response: Most definately! :P



Reviewer: The_Disturbed1 Signed Date: 2011.07.09 - 10:16PM Title: Prologue

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Sounds really good so far. I, for one, am glad that it's something so completely different. Reading the same old Harry and Ginny defeats Voldemort together over and over, it get's old ya know? Anyway really good so far, and I'm really eager to see where you go with this. As long as it doesn't interfere with "A Take That Differs." :P

Author's Response: It does get boring doesn't it...seriously, my fave fanfic writter is definately ghfan111 and she's all for AU's so...I HEART them! :D Don't worry, though, I don't think it'll interfere much with ATTD



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.07.09 - 07:11PM Title: Prologue

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So I read your author's note at the top, and while most people would turn away at the thought of a completely AU story, it actually really intrigued me. And the romance and Harry/Ginny appeal was most definitely for me. So anyways, this was a really interesting first chapter. I'm really looking forward to where you're going to take this, although I can already guess where some of this will go. Anyways, can't wait for the next update! Really, I'm hooked! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you weren't put off by it, I really think you'll enjoy it :D



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2011.07.09 - 06:26PM Title: Prologue

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You've got me hooked.....I just hope its not too angsty!!

Author's Response: There will be a bit of angst! But, don't worry...I don't think It'll get too bad :D




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