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Reviews For The Commoner Queen

Reviewer: Paz Signed Date: 2011.07.22 - 03:00AM Title: Chapter 1

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i love it! can't wait to see what you have instore next

Author's Response: Have loads in store, so keep tuned :))



Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2011.07.21 - 12:31AM Title: Chapter 1

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Oh, I do love when Harry and Ginny meet each other and look forward to seeing how this relationship will grow. I enjoy reading the creativity people come up with bringing these two together.

Author's Response: It's cool, isn't it? Just how many ways Harry and Gin have come together thanks to ff :D



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2011.07.20 - 04:54PM Title: Chapter 1

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The story is starting out fine. Hoping for some back story on what really happened with Voldie and why there is a Magic Monarchy.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: I'll try to get to that it future chapters, I'm aware that some backstory is seriously needed :P



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.07.20 - 11:01AM Title: Chapter 1

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It's an interesting story, and I really like where you're taking it, but this chapter felt a bit rushed. There were several grammatical mistakes that, for me, deterred from this chapter, and it felt like you could have given a bit more detail, like what Harry was wearing, what else happened at the party. I hope this story can keep up with the first chapter, which I found to be excellent. I hope this review wasn't too harsh. I just wanted to be honest.

P.S.-The second half of the chapter was all in bold.

Author's Response: reviewes that critizes politely are never harsh...thnkas you for telling me and I'll give it more thought in future chapter. I doo have a beta but some things are just hard to spot. Thanks for reviewing :)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.07.20 - 08:40AM Title: Chapter 1

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well, you've definatly got my attention
I feel kind of sad for Harry here - he's got even more to live up to that usual :)
keep up the good work

Author's Response: Glad I've got your attention. Yeah, poor Harry has more to live up to publicly, but, luckily, he doesn't have Voldemort on top of everything...I thought about having Voldemort after him too but I thought it was just too mean :P



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.07.20 - 05:57AM Title: Chapter 1

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I am enjoying your story and do, truly, look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Well, I'll be sure to give it to you soon :D I'm glad you're enjoying it :)



Reviewer: serious_blue Signed Date: 2011.07.19 - 01:45PM Title: Chapter 1

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Good story. Interesting take on the AU universe but that is what AU is all about.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hope you continue to do so :D



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.07.19 - 12:41PM Title: Chapter 1

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I just loved the Harry Ginny conversation. One of your reviewers said it. It is a modern fairy tale.

Author's Response: I lvoe writting it too! This IS a modern fairy tale! :D



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2011.07.19 - 12:06PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Alifromnm Signed Date: 2011.07.19 - 10:50AM Title: Chapter 1

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I am really loving this story. Very well thought out and written. I await your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks a million for your lovely words...



Reviewer: sacrutchfield Signed Date: 2011.07.19 - 08:22AM Title: Chapter 1

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i look for more in the future, i am vert intresed in where this will go.

Author's Response: I'll be sure to give you more in the future and I hope I can keep you interested! :D



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.07.19 - 07:57AM Title: Chapter 1

So they finally actually meet. I have a question though. It seems as if James was allowed to play Quidditch, but Harry wasn't/isn't? And politics is a taboo topic.... Waiting to see what else happens. Ginny obviously has very different opinions than the official royal ones. That could cause a lot of problems.

Author's Response: James was brought up during Voldemort's reign, he wasn't really hair to the thrown; besides, Harry can play quiddich, just with a lot of security precautions (Well, at least when the queen is watching and he's not sneaking out! ;)



Reviewer: decdraft Signed Date: 2011.07.19 - 07:19AM Title: Chapter 1

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A modern day fairy tale! I love it so far.

Author's Response: Love the description, modern day fairy tale is perfect :D I'm glad you're loving it.




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