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Reviewer: JadeYan Signed Date: 2011.10.02 - 12:42AM Title: The Drakestone

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haha Flower and Jennifer! loved it!

Author's Response: Harry (in case you haven't noticed) isn't very good at making names up on the spur of the moment. :-D -N-



Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed Date: 2011.09.30 - 08:50PM Title: The Drakestone

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I laughed out loud when I read the dragon's name. A smaller laugh when I read the evil wizard's name.

I've had to create stories like this for my kids. It's hard.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The dragons name simply happened. When I wrote that section and Lily asked the question, I hadn't given Harry's reply any thought. but the reply arrived with the question. I think that's the first time I've made myself laugh while writing. -N-



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2011.09.30 - 06:17PM Title: The Drakestone

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Forget the Tri-Wizard champion. Telling a story to five children is true courage.

Author's Response: Thanks, I agree entirely. -N-



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2011.09.30 - 04:39PM Title: The Drakestone

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Marvelous. I am suppose to be packing to go on holiday and I am reading this instead. Gotta run. Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and enjoy the holiday. -N-



Reviewer: sidnandragin Signed Date: 2011.09.30 - 01:38AM Title: The Drakestone

I just loved how all the children added their own elements to the story. it is so cute and refreshing to read a section that differs from the main one. I think the path of the children is so great. It may be that I am starting to sound like Henry here but I love it. I love Al, Lily & James as well as Henry and Annie. They are all so cute when they interact with one another. amazingly brilliant story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This chapter took a while to get right, but it's certainly helped me to get a handle on the different personalities of the kids. -N-



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.09.29 - 08:43PM Title: The Drakestone

weel harry si good but it won't be long and he won't be able to tell stories any more.....kutgw

Author's Response: Kids grow up, as harry will discover. -N-



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2011.09.29 - 07:16PM Title: The Drakestone

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So it's not easy to please everyone... I suppose you'd know as a writer! Nice chapter hehe.

Author's Response: Thanks. The next (and final) chapter should be ready in a few weeks. Story-telling "on the hoof" isn't easy, as Harry now knows. -N-



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.09.29 - 04:13PM Title: The Drakestone

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That was so enjoyable, the only word I can think of is "wonderful".

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm honoured! :-D -N-



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2011.09.29 - 03:38PM Title: The Drakestone

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This story is adorable! I'm glad the evil Zacharias was turned to dust, too bad Dolores couldn't have combusted. I love the way Henry is so accepting - ‘Your mam’s better at magicking things better than mine' that is great. Harry is great slipping in compliments to his wife during story time. :)

Author's Response: Yes, well as Harry discovered, Dolores couldn't combust, because stories sometimes go in unexpected directions (I sympathise with him). Henry is almost six and the magicking things better story won't last much longer. -N-



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2011.09.29 - 02:05PM Title: The Drakestone

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I am continually amazed at your productivity and your ability to capture what seems likely to be the characters of canon personalities after time has passed. I also enjoy your non hg stories over on fan fiction net.

I have children and the interaction and personalities of the children in your stories seems very true to life. It would be almost impossible for kids to remember not to mention magic--and Ginny's healing Lily was great. Of course she isn't going to let Lily keep suffering.

Thanks again and I look foward to seeing what comes next from your prolific keyboard.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I hope that Harry and Ginny are maturing, because that's what people do (Ron may be an exception ;-D ). I'm enjoying writing these stories of small children, In most fanfics the kids are at Hogwarts (and of the Albus Potter and the ...) variety.
Next at ffn will be the final chapter of "The Hufflepuff" and then this. SIYE was the frst place to accept any o my stories and they will always get my H/G stuff first (with one exception - coming soon).
-N-




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