Reviews For Time Troubles
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.03.07 - 11:10AM Title: The Message From The Firebird
Exciting that they've managed to devise a way to communicate with the children. But if Mac showed up and all of Hogwarts saw it, if the truth gets out as to who they are, won't that mean that a lot more people will know Harry and Ginny have a phoenix?
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.03.07 - 10:42AM Title: The Discussions and The Welcome
Interesting revelations. James certainly pulled one over the Twins.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2013.03.02 - 07:01AM Title: The Message From The Firebird
Well at lease now they have a way to communicate but it will still be some time I think before you let them off the hook....kutgw
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.07.18 - 02:13PM Title: The Discussions and The Welcome
glad to see your back at it......sometimes school is a pain but its job 1 for you so keep it up as for us well when u get a shot use it to relax and enjoy, because once you see this as a job it won't be fun any more.....kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.07.18 - 11:46AM Title: The Discussions and The Welcome
It was only last night that I thought I had not seen anything of this story for a while. Please put your studies before your writing, but try to update when you can.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.04.29 - 10:42AM Title: The Final Preparations
Hello! Are you keeping this story going? I like the plot and I thought you were really trying to master your writing technique. Please keep it up.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 07:00PM Title: The Final Preparations
well now the fun begins and not in a good way for some things....now they need to keep everything straight and i know i won't be able to do it for as long as they are going to....kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 01:38PM Title: The Final Preparations
Wonderful unique style of writing. Some of the English is a bit mangled, but it makes sense. I think you may be trying too hard sometimes to use words you may not know - "I called you to inform that my dear accolades have found a way to help you out. " - an accolade is a compliment not a person. Just keep the story going, and thank you.
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 01:11PM Title: The Final Preparations
Reviewer: Harryfan01 Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 11:22AM Title: The Final Preparations
I am so happy that I have finally posted this chapter. I really hope that I am able to meet your expectations. Will like to know your views.
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.09.19 - 11:28AM Title: Trouble Starts
I'm definitely intrigued by your story. I think it's a great idea. Might I suggest, thought, that you proof read a little more carefully before posting, and while it's been about ten years since I was these children's age, the way they talk doesn't sound much like teenagers to me. Perhaps consider more closely what is a normal comment/repsonse for people their age??
Reviewer: Harryfan01 Signed Date: 2011.09.08 - 12:03PM Title: The Morning Talks
I will really appreciate all my great reviewers to please write your questions and queries with your ratings because if your ratings are low and you will not tell me the problems, then I will not be able to counter your suggestions.
Reviewer: Harryfan01 Signed Date: 2011.09.08 - 11:57AM Title: The Morning Talks
Reviewer: cateyes033 Signed Date: 2011.09.06 - 04:46PM Title: The Morning Talks
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 10:37PM Title: The Morning Talks
I'm glad Harry and Ginny are figuring things out. At the very least, it will make them feel better. I assume we will eventually find out why Minerva and Albus don't remember the children being there in the past.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 07:52AM Title: The Morning Talks
I am actually getting to like your style and sometimes odd turn of phrase as much as the story. Do not worry about getting the grammar right as it is perfectly readable, just keep the story coming.
Reviewer: Harryfan01 Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 03:53AM Title: Trouble Starts
Guys, your wait is finally over and the fourth chapter is here. I wrote this chapter after reading all the suggestions and opinions sent to me by my fabulous readers. I really appreciates your support and it continues to motivate me to continue my story. I really hope that you will enjoy this chapter as I did while writing it. I wrote this review to thank you all about your awesome support as well as to inform that the next chapter will be posted in the month of October because my exams are coming but I will try to answer all your questions and queries as well as read your valuable suggestions, whenever I will get time during my exams.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 02:01AM Title: The Morning Talks
Oh crap now the cat is in the pixie and Harry and Ginny will e on there way shortly to get them...kutgw
Reviewer: hg4ever Signed Date: 2011.08.20 - 05:35AM Title: Relevations And The Plan
this is quite quite interesting :D
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2011.08.20 - 12:29AM Title: Relevations And The Plan
What a journey.... I envy them.