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Reviewer: hg4ever Signed Date: 2011.08.20 - 05:35AM Title: Relevations And The Plan

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this is quite quite interesting :D

Author's Response: Thank You so much for your opinion.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2011.08.20 - 12:29AM Title: Relevations And The Plan

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What a journey.... I envy them.

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.08.19 - 08:32PM Title: Relevations And The Plan

Leave it to James to screw up time and the lives the same as sirius would do for James or Peter to Harry....kutgw

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Reviewer: Harryfan01 Signed Date: 2011.08.18 - 12:13PM Title: Relevations And The Plan

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I hope that you'll like this chapter. Will appreciate any constructive reviews.

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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.08.17 - 01:18PM Title: Relevations And The Plan

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I do not know how you are going to get this plot to work out, but It is very interesting. I must admit I had to look at your profile to see why there were so many strange sentence constructions and I guess english is not your first language? Just keep it coming anyway.

Author's Response: You are right that English is not my first language. Also, I am very glad that you know the difficult times that lie ahead of me. The next few chapters will be tricky but this challenges are the most exciting part of writing stories. I am very pleased that you continued to read my story from the start and being there to motivate me from the beginning of this chapter.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2011.08.17 - 04:45AM Title: Relevations And The Plan

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Interesting. I don't understand how they will change their appearances though. Polyjuice in addition to having to be taken every hour they will need someone to turn into (every hour for how long?) and I think Harry would be rather suspicious of them needing to drink everyone. I also think that any type of charm could be easily broken. Maybe you have already thought of these issues, it was just what came to mind when I read the chapter. In Harry's sixth year I think he will be a bit suspicious of three new students so it will be interesting to see how they will be accepted.

Author's Response: I am very pleased that you told me your doubts about the next few chapters but I am sure the story is in a very exciting time and I cannot wait to write the next chapter. Yes, I have thought about these issues but thanks again for reminding me of the challenges that lay ahead of me. I am also very happy that you gave me another point to think about in the story i.e, Harry's reaction to the newcomers and I am quite anxious to write on this issue.




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