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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.04.29 - 10:42AM Title: The Final Preparations
Hello! Are you keeping this story going? I like the plot and I thought you were really trying to master your writing technique. Please keep it up.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I will be updating this story soon. Actually, I wrote 'Continuation of a Tradition' to brush up my writing before plunging myself in this story since this is my biggest writing project. I, sincerely thank you for your concern.
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Harryfan01.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 07:00PM Title: The Final Preparations
well now the fun begins and not in a good way for some things....now they need to keep everything straight and i know i won't be able to do it for as long as they are going to....kutgw
Author's Response: First of all, thanks for reviewing this chapter. I really appreciate your continued support. You are way too right that keeping everything straight is going to be a problem but that is the second best thing I like about writing, that is the challenges while thinking new twists and turns for the story. I am sure that some suprises will be waiting for readers. Until then, thank you to be my pillar of strength.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 01:38PM Title: The Final Preparations
Wonderful unique style of writing. Some of the English is a bit mangled, but it makes sense. I think you may be trying too hard sometimes to use words you may not know - "I called you to inform that my dear accolades have found a way to help you out. " - an accolade is a compliment not a person. Just keep the story going, and thank you.
Author's Response: Thank You so much for being from the start and helping me to improve my writing skills. Your suggestions had been constant reminder that I have to improve. I'm quite pleased that you find my style of writing intresting. I hope that you will continue to be my pillar of strength. Thank you for pointing my error and I will try to reduce such mistakes in the future.
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 01:11PM Title: The Final Preparations
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Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing my story.
Reviewer: Harryfan01 Signed Date: 2011.10.31 - 11:22AM Title: The Final Preparations
I am so happy that I have finally posted this chapter. I really hope that I am able to meet your expectations. Will like to know your views.
Author's Response: Mine
