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Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.02.01 - 11:09PM Title: The Big Store

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This kind of story is just what I needed. Long stressful day. To be made longer at work. Thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing it. -N-



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.15 - 10:10AM Title: The Big Store

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Oh, what a perfectly excellent story!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed Date: 2013.12.22 - 08:20PM Title: The Big Store

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Decided to re-read this prior to reading "New Year's Eve". Glad I did; it was really worth it. There's a bunch of your other ones I should probably read again during the holiday break.

Author's Response: Thanks. I shouldn’t have favourites of my own stories, but I think I achieved everything I wanted to in this story: humour, family, the spirit of Christmas, a bit of romance, and the appearance of the man with the beard. -N-



Reviewer: Cassieopia Signed Date: 2013.12.15 - 12:40PM Title: The Big Store

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Reviewer: gemz1313 Signed Date: 2012.06.26 - 05:58AM Title: The Big Store

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Lovely story :D love reading about the Potters with young children

Author's Response: Thank yo. I'm already planning this year's Christmas story. -N-



Reviewer: mysinger Signed Date: 2012.02.25 - 12:29AM Title: The Big Store

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Excellent story! Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.01.20 - 06:51PM Title: The Big Store

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What a lovely story for the grown-ups...just to remind us of the REAL magic of Christmas:)

Author's Response: Thanks again, I'm glad you liked it. -N-



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2011.12.27 - 07:52AM Title: The Big Store

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That was a wonderful ending :)

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.12.26 - 10:35PM Title: The Big Store

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Great way to wrap up a sweet Christmas tale.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and stars -N-



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2011.12.26 - 02:41AM Title: The Big Store

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I've just finished reading all three chapters and find this story worthy of my "Must Read Each Year" Christmas List. It's bound to join the ranks of Dickens' "A Christmas Carol" and O. Henry's "Gift of the Magi" as stories to foster the Christmas spirit. Thanks for writing such a delightful tale and including more of your great characters besides the Potter family.

Have a very happy holiday.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the kind words. I tried to capture something of the magic of Christmas. I'm pretty certain that Mark will be back in another story very soon, as will Miss Brown. -N-



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2011.12.26 - 01:22AM Title: The Big Store

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Well done, you. Yay! The mystery is solved and more. Thank you for cheering me up big time! What a joy to read.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. This last chapter took longer to finish than I expected. I blame Lavender. -N-



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.12.25 - 04:28PM Title: The Big Store

Wonderful. And perfect for the season. I loved Saint Nicholas.

Author's Response: Thanks - but his name was Nicholas Sant, wasn't it? ;-D -N-



Reviewer: Bethina Signed Date: 2011.12.24 - 09:39PM Title: The Big Store

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Loved it! Thank you for the beautiful Christmas gift! Have a restful and Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. Nerry Christmas. -N-



Reviewer: jennkaye Signed Date: 2011.12.24 - 09:36PM Title: The Big Store

What a lovely story. I always smile a little bit more to see an update from you. Merry Christmas, Happy New Year, and thank you for hours of wonderful reading!

Author's Response: Thank you. Merry Christmas, and lets hope that 2012 is the year i actually finish some of my stories. -N-



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.12.24 - 05:14AM Title: The Big Store

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Big thanks for an excellent Christmas present. And I now know my beard will be safe.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Merry Christmas. -N-



Reviewer: Kimbovet Signed Date: 2011.12.23 - 08:16PM Title: The Big Store

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Great story! But I have a question involving Lavender. If she is a werewolf, how can she wear a silver chain & heart without being affected?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
According to the Harry Potter Wiki "Contrary to what the Muggle world believes, werewolves are not affected by silver." I assumed that was true. However, they don't provide a reference :-( I'll check. -N-



Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2011.12.23 - 06:57PM Title: The Big Store

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This must be the sweetest story I've ever read!

Author's Response: Thank you and merry Christmas. -N-



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.12.23 - 04:46PM Title: The Big Store

very nice end to the story and i am glad to see th skids still believe even if the parents don't....we are learning this all over again soon as i am become an uncle soon so next year it will be a different way of doing christmas....kutgw in all you do and happy holidays and merry christmas

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think Harry and Ginny maay be undecided after this. :-D Merry Christms -N-



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2011.12.23 - 03:38PM Title: The Big Store

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Nice one - a lovely, feel good way to end this. I love that the manager of the toy department is Marion Ett.

Author's Response: Thank you. Christmas stories must be "feel good" there's no alternative. :-D ... although the BBC had a tradition of Christmas Ghost Stories (M R James adaptions) - maybe next year... If you can name a werewolf Remus Lupin, then you can do pretty much anything. Merry Christmas -N-



Reviewer: JadeYan Signed Date: 2011.12.23 - 01:42PM Title: The Big Store

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I just love the Potters! This is such a lovely Christmas treat! Thank you very much and Merry Christmas Northumbrian!


Author's Response: Thanks, this was supposed to be a short and silly Christmas Tale. Instead, it's long and silly. Glad you liked it, and Merry Christmas -N-




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