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Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.12.19 - 10:19PM Title: The Ritual

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Reviewer: Kimbovet Signed Date: 2011.12.18 - 12:00PM Title: The Ritual

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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2011.12.16 - 02:37AM Title: The Ritual

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Since I'm reviewing for both this chapter and the previous one, I'll start with Chapter ten. First of all, I think Dumbledore is reaping the aggrivation he deserves. I love that Fawks knows exactly where Harry is and won't tell Dumbledore. I also love how he cooperates with Professor McGonagall and seems to be smugly rubbing that fact in Dumbledore's "wounds". I couldn't help laughing at the Dursleys' plight. Vernon and Petunia are reaping what they wrought and so is Dudley. I hope there will be more about what happens to them in future chapters.

Draco is so lucky to have Severus for his godfather. To have someone so accepting of him now that he thinks he's repulsive will go a long way in his emotional recovery. I hope Draco will find some peace in knowing he is loved unconditionally by Severus. The ritual seems very important and I wonder how it will affect Conan, who until Draco came to live with Severus, thought of himself as Severus' only son and heir. This could make for some interesting challenges for Draco to cope with. Also, it seems to me, Harry is undergoing the same ritual and I wonder if the boys are bonded together as brothers in some way because the rites are being performed simultaneously, even though they are taking place in different locations. This is indeed a thought-provoking chapter.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 04:00PM Title: The Ritual

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I might be a bit thick, but I think something interesting happened,



Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2011.12.14 - 01:16PM Title: The Ritual

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Whoa, that's a surprise! You have to love the variety of answers that magic can provide. I would never have thought of anything like the Godfather Ritual, which may explain why I am a reader instead of an author. :-)




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