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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 11:18AM Title: The Weeks Gone By

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Not a lot of action but Sirius gave himself plenty to think about.

Author's Response: He did, indeed.



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 04:43AM Title: The Weeks Gone By

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I really enjoyed the beginning where Sirius was explaining about his incorrect expectations about Harry in comparison to James. I have honestly come to like your story, overall. It just seems like parts drag at times. Way too much explanation over Sirius' disquiet on Slytherin, Harry, and the sorting, though I did enjoy Remus' logic behind it.

I'm looking forward to seeing how things go for Harry once school is back in session.

Author's Response: This was a chapter meant to push things forward a bit - revealing some information that we may come back to later. Also, character introspection is fun, and I must admit to being a writer who focuses on exposition a lot more than most. I hope the next chapter, which is now up, is a nice break from my exposition, with the action involved.




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