Reviews For The Search for Life and Death
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2012.02.14 - 01:59AM Title: The Dementors The only real observation I had, you are refusing to elaborate on. So, for now, nice intriguing twist for us to contemplate at the end. Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 09:17PM Title: The Dementors Is Harry really unable to speak and hear, or does he not speak and hear because he does not think he can? Psychosomatic illness? Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 09:17PM Title: The Dementors This was a very well written chapter. The pacing was good, the characters were well written and believable. I really like your Ron, and I love the addition of Conan. He is a wonderful character that humanizes Snape. Very glad to see Ginny finally make an appearance and I hope she will be in the story from this point on. Hopefully it won't take forever to build her relationship with Harry, but i guess I'll be patient if I must :) I can understand her being weary of Malfoy after everything, but she seemed to be a little overly harsh considering Draco hadn't done anything at the time to spur the attack. Anyway, awesome job and please keep them coming. Reviewer: ReaderRabbit Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 06:50PM Title: The Dementors Very interesting. First I was wondering when our Ginny was going to make an entrance. Secondly What a refreshing new twist with Ron being somewhat of a protector of Malfoy. I don't think I have ever read that twist and hope you continue in that vain. I am always disappointed to always see Ron as a jealous dumb act without thinking character when he could be written so much better and lastly Are we to assume that Harry's symptoms are phycosymatic? I also see that he remembered much more of his parents death then before so could that have something to do with it? Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 02:45PM Title: The Dementors Good chapter, but have the dementors done something to Harry? Reviewer: minerfan Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 11:01AM Title: The Dementors So now he can hear, will be curious how people react to that. Great story | |||||||
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