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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2012.03.06 - 03:48AM Title: The Dementors

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Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2012.02.14 - 01:59AM Title: The Dementors

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The only real observation I had, you are refusing to elaborate on. So, for now, nice intriguing twist for us to contemplate at the end.



Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 09:17PM Title: The Dementors

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Is Harry really unable to speak and hear, or does he not speak and hear because he does not think he can? Psychosomatic illness?


Author's Response: I'm afraid revealing that would ruin the story, but interesting hypothesis.



Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 09:17PM Title: The Dementors

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This was a very well written chapter. The pacing was good, the characters were well written and believable. I really like your Ron, and I love the addition of Conan. He is a wonderful character that humanizes Snape. Very glad to see Ginny finally make an appearance and I hope she will be in the story from this point on. Hopefully it won't take forever to build her relationship with Harry, but i guess I'll be patient if I must :) I can understand her being weary of Malfoy after everything, but she seemed to be a little overly harsh considering Draco hadn't done anything at the time to spur the attack. Anyway, awesome job and please keep them coming.

Author's Response: For Ginny, it's more like she's just waiting for when Draco turns and attacks. After all, his previous actions for all the years that she's been in Hogwarts, he's been very predictable. I'm glad you like what I'm doing with the characters. And you can pretty much count on Ginny being around now.



Reviewer: ReaderRabbit Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 06:50PM Title: The Dementors

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Very interesting. First I was wondering when our Ginny was going to make an entrance. Secondly What a refreshing new twist with Ron being somewhat of a protector of Malfoy. I don't think I have ever read that twist and hope you continue in that vain. I am always disappointed to always see Ron as a jealous dumb act without thinking character when he could be written so much better and lastly Are we to assume that Harry's symptoms are phycosymatic? I also see that he remembered much more of his parents death then before so could that have something to do with it?

Intriguing.

Author's Response: I was very excited to post this chapter, since Ginny has made her entrance. You can probably expect to see her from here on out much more frequently than previously in the story. I have read a lot of fanfiction in the past and a common occurrence is Draco basically taking Ron's place when the latter becomes so jealous that he somehow manages to ruin his relationship with Harry, and usually Hermione, as well. I was determined to put a different take on it, and I see Ron as being much more loyal than a lot of people portray him. This chapter actually hinted at a few different areas where Ron is more than he seems, but I was being rather subtle. :) As for Harry's hearing briefly returning, I can only say that it will later be explained. I can't reveal anything now without ruining the fanfic. I do so enjoy the speculation, though. His remembering more of his parents' deaths than before was meant to illustrate how much closer the dementors got to him than they had before.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 02:45PM Title: The Dementors

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Good chapter, but have the dementors done something to Harry?

Author's Response: You're the first person to ever consider that. No, the dementors haven't done anything to Harry beyond their usual. His brief ability to hear again will eventually be explained. For now, feel free to speculate.

Author's Response: You're the first person to ever consider that. No, the dementors haven't done anything to Harry beyond their usual. His brief ability to hear again will eventually be explained. For now, feel free to speculate.



Reviewer: minerfan Signed Date: 2012.02.12 - 11:01AM Title: The Dementors

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So now he can hear, will be curious how people react to that. Great story

Author's Response: Read the last two paragraphs again, dear. No one is going to yet know that he could but for a moment.




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