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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.04.26 - 10:36PM Title: Interlude One

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I have just finished reading what you have written for this story and have found it quite interesting. The beginning was a bit heavy with information but it was needed. I am enjoying the storyline.
There is a few spelling errors here and there, but nothing too distracting.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. And yeah, unfortunately I've had to do quite a bit of information dumping but that'll help with the setup for everything else. :) I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapter.




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