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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2017.01.19 - 07:48PM
Title: Shield
Sweet ending! I was hoping Teddy would be the recipient as soon as I realized the possibility of Andromeda or Narcissa being the heir. I liked Neville being called upon to help.
Author's Response: Thanks, I stuck a lot of Arthurian legend into this one, and I've still to use it in other stories. -N-
Reviewer: Cassieopia Signed
Date: 2014.03.07 - 02:20PM
Title: Shield
No Review
Reviewer: destin4fl Signed
Date: 2012.03.21 - 05:36PM
Title: Shield
outstanding!
Author's Response: Thanks -N-
Reviewer: Duelist Signed
Date: 2012.03.17 - 06:54PM
Title: Shield
Okay, this is officially my favorite of the responses to this challenge. Congratulations!
Author's Response: Thank you. Gald you enjoyed it. -N-
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2012.02.25 - 10:39PM
Title: Shield
Very awesome ending! That's who I was hoping the heir was. I love Ron in this story - Draco being forced to be polite was hysterical :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I love Ron in this story, too. I think that, had he been able to snog Hermione a few times, he might have been more forgiving of Harry and Ginny. But not of Draco, no matter how polite he was.-N-
Reviewer: quinn Signed
Date: 2012.02.25 - 08:35PM
Title: Shield
Nicely handled! The alterations on the shield made for an especially nice touch. Thanks for submitting an enjoyable entry to the challenge!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The shield (and Arthurian legend) was the seed from which this storie grew.-N-
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2012.02.25 - 09:09AM
Title: Shield
You are a genius!
Author's Response: Thanks again. -N-
Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed
Date: 2012.02.18 - 07:43PM
Title: Shield
I was hoping it would be Teddy. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you. -N-
Reviewer: picton Signed
Date: 2012.02.17 - 02:18PM
Title: Shield
No Review
Reviewer: Miz636 Signed
Date: 2012.02.16 - 05:41PM
Title: Shield
Nicely done at the end, there. It was somewhat obvious that it wouldn't be Draco but Teddy, but the way you wrote that was quite amusing. The mystery of the first chapter and part of the second really drew me into this story. Your idea of comparing the Vault to the Round Table was intriguing. I enjoyed reading it immensely, so thanks for the read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The outcome was never really in doubt, I suppose. I'm not going to reward Draco, and the only alternative, moving down a third branch of the family tree required a lot more work than I had time for. As I've said, my initial idea was for the round table, and when I found Brunor "the Black" on the table, that made the idea a certainty.
-N-
Reviewer: matthunt101 Signed
Date: 2012.02.16 - 12:51PM
Title: Shield
This is an excellent little story. I find it fitting that the Lupin's are now a Most Noble and Ancient House. nothing would have made Sirius happier. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks, I agree. -N-
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed
Date: 2012.02.16 - 11:29AM
Title: Shield
I very much enjoyed this!
Author's Response: Thank you. -N-
Reviewer: crystaltips1 Signed
Date: 2012.02.16 - 09:42AM
Title: Shield
Another great story from you, very well crafted and extremley enjoyable.
I would love to hear your thoughts on why Draco was so polite to Harry using his christian name and not the usual Potter. Also Welcoming him into his home, especially so soon after the battle . He also didnt seem to have a change of heart or was as welcoming of Ginny or Ron(though Ron i can understand).
Thanks and Good luck!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Draco is under house arrest, and he's on the losing side. I tried to hint that Harry is close to Andromeda (he calls her Dromeda and he knew where she would be). Narcissa lied to Voldemort for Harry, and she's Andromeda's sister. Draco knows that, and herefore tries to be nice, but he's not good at it, and sometimes forgets himself. His polite welcome is, I think, grudging (perhaps that doesn't come across). Despite what some misguided lunatics think (sorry, Draco/Ginny fans) I don't think Draco really knows, or cares about Ginny and I'm certain she despises him. Despite an enormous number of fanfics to the contrary, I don't think he's particularly good with girls (his Yule Ball date was pug-face and he's never been seen to take a particular interest in girls). Ron would cheerfully thump him, and to be honest, I can understand why.-N-
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2012.02.16 - 05:32AM
Title: Shield
Good ending.
Author's Response: Thanks
-N-
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2012.02.16 - 05:30AM
Title: Shield
Good story. Good luck in the challenge.
Author's Response: Thank you. -N-
Reviewer: karldubhe Signed
Date: 2012.02.15 - 10:54PM
Title: Shield
Good lord it's been ages since I left a review here, and I've had to re-register in order to do it.
A most excellent tale, like all of your other work too. I enjoyed it very much and hope this is the story that wins the contest.
Mind you, it's really the readers of your work who win. We get a quality tale from a novice author, who will hopefully be writing his/her own works in time. (of course, I do hope you finish your potter project first...)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It’s always good to hear from a new reviewer (it’s always good to hear from the regulars, too). Thanks for the compliment, too. My Potter Project requires me to finish this, Aurors and Schoolgirls and Hunters and Prey, and to write one more novel length Harry/Ginny story (set in the year Ron and Harry turn 21) plus the Lavender/Susan/Bobbie vampire novel, and any short stuff which takes my fancy. That will keep me busy for more than a year.-N-
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed
Date: 2012.02.15 - 10:24PM
Title: Shield
I knew it! Great little two-shot and you got it done on time. Now get to work on Hunters & Prey, Aurors & Schoolgirls, and Strangers ;-) of course just about anything from you is a great read!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Get to work? I’ve just completed three (not exactly romantic) one shots (a Ron/Hermione, a Neville/Hannah, and a George/Angelina) and I have two more planned (Denis/OC and Millicent/Marcus (don’t ask about that second)). There’s an idea for a Ginny/Michael GoF/OotP story forming in my head, too, but I’m resisting that one!-N-
Reviewer: lunagranger Signed
Date: 2012.02.15 - 10:08PM
Title: Shield
So clever and funny! I loved Harry and Ginny touching one another all the time. and little Teddy is priceless. And the things you thought about the crests. You write better each day. Now to Hunters and Prey (joking, who am I to say that?).
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry and Ginny’s constant need for contact is, I think, a natural part of a blossoming relationship.This story grew in a very unusual way, even for me, and the crests were integral. Brunor le Noir is named on the Winchester Round Table (Brunor the Black, the knight in the Badly Fitting Coat – brilliant for this story). Next from me will be another chapter of Strangers. -N-
Reviewer: Kimbovet Signed
Date: 2012.02.15 - 07:31PM
Title: Shield
Great ending!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Ron enjoyed it, too.
-N-
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