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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.03.30 - 07:36PM Title: Chapter 16 Fun in London

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I suppose it is understandable that Ron and George are drowning their sorrow over losing a brother in alcohol, but it is a shame they are both so out of control. Hopefully Bill can get through to them.

Author's Response: They are a bit out of control, but they will come around.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.17 - 11:10PM Title: Chapter 16 Fun in London

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Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2013.08.24 - 12:40AM Title: Chapter 16 Fun in London

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I see Harry is still suffering from being entirely too nice. He never should have left the Hang-over Potions for Ron and George. Maybe if they had to suffer a bit they would learn their lesson. Looking forward to the Christmas Pantomime!

Author's Response: Thanks! Actually you are not the first person to mention that. I just think that Harry would leave the potion for them :). The Christmas Pantomime will be fun, up next the Parents' Weekend!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2013.08.13 - 07:24AM Title: Chapter 16 Fun in London

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great chapter. I'm glad Hermione has now understood about the essays and won't keep in a strop over it :)
Hope Ron and George sort themselves out soon

Author's Response: Thanks! Hermione should be much better now. She has so little real life experience, I figured she needed to be ready to move into the Ministry (or where ever she may end up). Ron and George are a bit lost at the moment - more to come on them :)



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2013.08.13 - 12:16AM Title: Chapter 16 Fun in London

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Great chapter. I really like how the characters are helping each other with their problem-solving. I'm glad Hermione now understands why she needs to follow directions and that Harry is helping out Lavender, Parvati and Padma: I hope their shop will be a success. I also loved the way Ginny and Harry are talking about solutions to the George/Ron drinking problem because it shows just how well they work together and can find ways to solve life's problems without getting into a screaming match; not all young couples would be this adept at that skill because many older adults are that mature in their thinking. Well done! I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like where I am taking the characters. I picture Harry as trying to help his friends whenever possible as well as having an eye to helping the wizarding world recover from the war. Helping the girls with their shop would be a good way of accomplishing both ends.



Reviewer: Kyral Signed Date: 2013.08.12 - 03:01PM Title: Chapter 16 Fun in London

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Ron and George are being stupid depressed drunks and Harry shouldn't have left the Hangover Potion for them. One thing that I have been liking about this fic that sets it apart from the others is the way you are writing Muggle tech as being on par (or in some places ahead of) Wizarding magic. It's something that is rarely brought up, or if it is, Magic universally trumps Tech. It's good to see something different on that subject. Actually on the subject of guns, a friend of mine has remarked that The Battle of Hogwarts could have been finished almost as soon as it started if there had been a couple of well placed snipers. At any rate good luck with your surgery and get well soon!

Author's Response: I think of Ron and George as a bit lost at this point in time. I'm glad you like my take on tech vs magic. Some people seem to feel as you said they could overcome magic, others seem to feel magic could overcome muggle weaponry. I think most wizards don't know enough about muggle weaponry to protect themselves. I can just see a pureblood staring down the barrel of a gun and laugh as they don't know what they are facing. Thanks for the well wishes!




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