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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.13 - 10:15AM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

Hahahahahahaha I'm enjoying your Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: This is by far my lightest and fluffiest story. It was only later that I started randomly killing off characters and dropping nukes on Hogwarts.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.28 - 06:29PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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I guess Gwenog is a bit of a stickler for the rules. Glad that Harry had a good time at the Quidditch game.

Author's Response: Gwenog is fun to write. I must work her into some future story.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.19 - 07:30PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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To me it seem that Gwenog Jones don't like Harry, that seem to have issue with him.

Author's Response: I suspect that Gwenog has issues with all males, being a successful woman in a male dominated sport. It's nothing personal!



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.05.27 - 11:33PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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I'm glad Harry has a Quidditch watching buddy! It sounds like he had a great time - it certainly ended well :)

Author's Response: I’ve seen some pretty scary female football (soccer to you, guvnor) supporters in my time and based the Howlers on them. Guess what? I had to re-write the end a few times. I haven’t had a chapter rejected due to content for ages; I miss those days.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.09.06 - 06:44AM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Lol! Great effort to save themselves there but they didn't quite manage it!



Author's Response: It was bound to come out in the end!



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 05:40PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Well the secret's out to a degree. I did think that this is when you's have introduced Ron to Harry, can't wait to the meeting with the family.

Author's Response: The girls were always going to figure it out first.



Reviewer: beeg123 Signed Date: 2012.06.26 - 01:15PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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does anyone ever think it's 'nice' to meet the ever hard ass Gwenog? Betca Harry's visit makes it to the papers...and Molly!

Author's Response: I like Gwenog. It’s amazing for a character that’s only mentioned a couple of times in the books how many fan fics she appears in. Maybe I just have a thing for dominant women. I’m sure Mrs Brennus will be able to confirm this after she comes and unchains me…



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.06.14 - 10:49PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

Highly amusing. I had a feeling the Harpies would find out first. Gwenog was a hoot. I enjoyed the scene in the stands. And now poor Harry has to face the Weasleys. Don't blame him for wanting to hightail it to Brazil.

Author's Response: Rio’s very nice this time of year I’m told…



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2012.06.13 - 05:50PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.06.10 - 11:49PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Another great chapter. Very funny and, just a happy cheer.
Loved Hary's response to the fans in the box.
Can't wait for the big meeting with Ginny's family.

Author's Response: I, long ago, quite sensibly learnt to fear the female of the species and Harry, been the smart lad that he is, I’m sure would feel the same. Having attended many footie matches over the years I can wholeheartedly confirm that the scariest supports are always women. Unless, of course, you support Portsmouth where it’s difficult to tell the difference.



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2012.06.10 - 12:47PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Maybe Gwenog needs to find someone to shag with in the changing rooms! LOL

Author's Response: Ah, I fear Gwenog is married to her sport. She probably has her hands full keeping all the other Harpies in line. Actually, that’s given me an idea for the sequel!



Reviewer: Dando Signed Date: 2012.06.10 - 07:40AM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Loving this story and the fact that you are English (as am I). Hurray for English breakfasts and "proper food" and I know that street in London etc. I love your characters and the silliness. Love the way you are writing the sex scenes, hilarious. Can't wait for the next chapters and hope that you'll be writing more once this great story is over. Welcometo Harry Potter fan fic and we definitely need more like you!

Author's Response: I do actually have a short story already finished but it’s a lot more sensible than this story (I know, shocking!) Having seen the reaction to this tale I must admit I have started planning a sequel and have a few ideas worked out. I would nearly love to produce something deep and emotional but I think I’m stuck writing smutty silliness!



Reviewer: crystaltips1 Signed Date: 2012.06.09 - 06:23PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Yay ! another entertaining chapter. Well worth the wait.

100% agree with your Author notes on English breakfast, another pet hate of mine is the
use of American slang words in fanfiction stories .

As ever looking foward to reading more (especially looking forward to Harry meeting the
Weasleys) will they know who Harry really is before they meet him ?

Kutgw

Author's Response: I wasn’t sure about including hash browns in my list of approved English breakfast items, but as they now seem to be a standard item in most motorway service stations all day breakfasts I put them in. I’m probably making my version of Harry a bit too autobiographical (the baked bean thing is something me and Mrs Brennus have argued about for years) and his choice of breakfast items proves that. I’m obviously projecting a subconscious desire to be a wizard or something. Now, if I could only get that damn Expelliarmus spell to work…



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2012.06.09 - 05:41PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Some typos around, but nice one!

Author's Response: Typos? TYPOS!!! I’ve been through this chapter 50 times! Because it was initially rejected due to content (I seem to be making a habit of that!) my beta has been through it twice and even the site administrator suggested some corrections. And you’re telling me there are STILL typos??? AAAAAGGGGHHH (author turns green, swells to twice his normal size and starts smashing his lap-top against the wall)



Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2012.06.09 - 04:28PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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You are so funny! I find your author notes to be as amusing as this story. Harry and Ginny are simply a riot, and I cannot wait until he meets the rest of her family. Good times ahead!

Author's Response: I must admit I do enjoy writing the author notes. I think I have a deep-seated need to try and explain my insanity and the notes provide an opportunity to do this. Glad you’re enjoying the story.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.06.09 - 03:25PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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That was what I call a happy chapter. Good read.

Author's Response: Thank you. When I started this story I was worried my weird brand of humour wouldn’t really go down well but it seems my fears were unfounded. More happy chapters coming up.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.06.09 - 01:36PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Great chapter! Everything from Harry and Ginny's banter at the beginning, through his introduction to the world of the Harpies, to running into Gwenog at the end was all fun and well written.

Author's Response: Thanks! The bit where Ginny is forced to admit to her relationship with Harry to the Harpies is actually one of the first scenes I wrote and the rest of the story sort of grew around it. We’ll be seeing the Harpies again in a few chapters when Harry attends their Christmas party. I’m sure this will be a well-mannered event with jelly and ice-cream and games of pass the parcel. Possibly.



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2012.06.09 - 12:06PM Title: Chapter 7 – Amazonian Hooligans

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Another fun chapter! Guess there's going to be another conversation with Molly fairly soon...

Author's Response: The whole Weasley clan are featured in the next chapter. Molly will be the least of Harry’s problems.




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