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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.21 - 04:51AM Title: Chapter 18 Cokeworth

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Poor Emma, for her the whole situation must look like a bad dream.
I think that Emma character has a lot of potential. I have some guesses, what role she might play and I am looking forward to read how far I am right.
Will Molly now make peace with the Potters? The conversation was very enlightening and I really hope that there is a chance that Molly finally sees the light. We will see...
I'm glad that the relationship between Tonks and the Potters calms down finally.
Many thanks for another entertaining instalment!


Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoyed writing Emma's reaction to the wizarding world and figuring out what may be happening. Molly will eventually reconcile with everyone, but she has that tendency to react without considering the consequences. She's now seeing what those consequences are and has to reconcile with her daughter and son-in-law. I thought Tonks needed to make her peace with the Potters and Sirius.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.05.07 - 05:26PM Title: Chapter 18 Cokeworth

I'm not sure Ginny will ever truly trust Tonks again but Molly is going to have to face the fact that she is on the outside looking in for a long time.....Emma was a nice touch....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks! I think it will be a long while before Ginny can trust either of them. I'm glad you liked Emma.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.05.07 - 04:53PM Title: Chapter 18 Cokeworth

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Good update. The use of modern technology looks interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2015.05.06 - 03:26PM Title: Chapter 18 Cokeworth

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With amends made, let the fights begin. I see this coming to an end soon. I really enjoyed this story.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I wanted them to make amends with their family and friends.



Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2015.05.06 - 01:44PM Title: Chapter 18 Cokeworth

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I was glad to see you able to post an update! This was a very informative chapter, and very interesting to see them working with Muggle technology to track down Voldemort's movements and perhaps even defeat him. It's been some time since I have read the beginning chapters, does Harry know he is a Horcrux and has that been dealt with yet?

I was surprised at Ginny's harshness towards Tonks. Tonks had no idea she was cursed or being controlled, and Ginny of all people should show a bit more understanding. Overall, great chapter and I am looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think mixing Muggle technology and magic can be interesting. The unexpected Horcrux has not been dealt with yet. Ginny's feelings towards Tonks are rather mixed. Watching a person you trusted betray and torture the love of your life would be rather horrifying, but I think Ginny would be more understanding than most. I think see her again for the first time would bring out both emotions.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.05.06 - 12:52PM Title: Chapter 18 Cokeworth

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I reviewed this chapter on that other website already, but I just wanted to say again how much I enjoyed it and how great it is to see you updating your stories. I'll be looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the double reviews :). I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and hope to update soon.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.05.06 - 09:49AM Title: Chapter 18 Cokeworth

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great update, glad Molly's seeing the error of her ways :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I can so easily see Molly as regretting her harsh words as soon as she calms down.




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