Reviews For The Oath
Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.14 - 12:39AM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Ginny is MAGNIFICENT!!!! Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.03.01 - 06:32PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls What woman would not like to have her shirt torn off in a fit of passion at least once in her life. Ginny handled Sharon as well as could be expected under the circumstances. It will be interesting to see if anything comes of the conversation with the Malfoys. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.05.28 - 02:09AM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Loved Ginny in bitch mode! She shut down the Malfoys - Damn but Draco has horrible taste in women. Loved how protective she is of Harry. He needs someone who will stand up for him. I love the little moments as well, like Ginny getting worried Harry would prefer Sharon (silly Ginny) or that she was afraid he was going to dump her - as if he would do something that stupid! Love the chapter - now I'm upset that Harry's psycho ex is named Sharon. Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.10.05 - 08:37PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Harry had me wondering too how he was going to react..lol! I giggled at Ginny wondering if there were any other ex-girlfriends of Harry's that she could punch:))) Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2012.10.01 - 04:24PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Nothing quite like dinner AND a show. Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2012.09.04 - 05:08PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls About the hyphen thing, JKR is a very lucky amateur. Her inconsistencies are legend. Reviewer: Imperator 277 Signed Date: 2012.09.04 - 12:51AM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls I remember Sharon came at Harry with a knife when he told her he was a wizard. I am guessing she is one of fanatical religious people who believe magic is evil and wizards are the devils minions. What would her working for an insurance firm have anything to do with her attitude to Harry? I am guessing she is just as psycho about wizards as she is about Harry "cheating" on her. I don't think Harry should let Malfoy and Astoria get away with their comments. Hoping they get their comeuppance or get pranked on a national scale or get whatever political clout they have taken away cause I just love a story where arrogant criminals get taken down a peg or two. They get built up thinkin they are about to come out on top and then it all comes crashing down. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Reviewer: shlincoln Signed Date: 2012.09.03 - 09:04PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls I think there is a tendency in this story (and the List) to get a bit broad with the characters who are the "bad guys" which then makes whatever Harry & Ginny do in response perfectly justified. Though considering the story's conceit it's not so much a bug as a feature I suppose? If you want something fun and silly, this is the place, if a more naturalistic approach is your thing, you'll be disappoint. But then again, after ~ 75K words people should come to expect this. Which is my very roundabout way of saying yes they were too bitchy, but it's part and parcel with a Mr. Brennus story, things jump a notch in a hurry, so whatever. Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed Date: 2012.09.03 - 08:58PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Good chapter except for a couple of typos (and my pet peeve of a then that should be a than). Are Harry and Ginny a little over the top in this chapter? Yes. Is it a problem? No. This story and The List are both written with Harry and (especially) Ginny being very passionate people that have very large personalities. While not quite in character with the books (well, maybe Ginny, a bit), it is an AU story. I don't generally care for OOC portrayals, but it works here because of the way you have structured the story. If this were in the "what happened during those 19 years" genre, it would not work. Was it a bit trashy of Ginny to put the beat down on Sharon? Yes, but this Ginny would do that and this Harry would love it. It is consistent to the world you've created. And, it was FUN! I would be horribly critical of the trashy behavior of both women if I were in the restaurant, but here, I was cheering Ginny and enjoying her standing up for her man. Sharon seems like a bunny-boiler (80s movie reference alert - but I got the title, so you'll get this). JKR described Pansy and pug-faced, so that is right on. Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 08:56PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Response to your response: Somewhere in between "bloody boring" and "over the top" is the space we like to call "realistic", otherwise known as "believable". It enables the reader to identify with a character and his/her choices/dilemmas/emotions and generally provides a satisfying reading experience. This area does not preclude the use of humor, drama, action or fluff. Reviewer: Imperator 277 Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 06:58PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Great chapter. Good intro to Shanon and glad that Ginny gave her a whoopin. It would make sense that Malfoy would be behind the slander about Harry, Maybe he paid that one girl to get close to Harry and lie about Harry not being so "heroic in bed?" Hmm........... Malfoy said he may get clear of charges. Please do not let that be so! If he was a DE how did he get out of prison? Hope he gets his ass thrown back in. How in her right mind would Astoria think Harry would be interested in marrying her sister? Makes me mad the blood purists are still in power. Grrr! I had a feeling what Harry would do after watching Ginny beat up Sharon. Why wouldn't he be turned on by that? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 06:38PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls I'm glad Harry's free of Sharon. She seems a bit unbalanced. Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 05:11PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls An eventful chapter. Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 04:30PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls haha - they were a little bitchy but when you're stuck in the evening from hell, why wouldn't you be? Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 02:24PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls I think you where spot on and to have a relaps of sharron was good to see...now draco is in deep....soon they may find Harry's wand trained on them again....kutgw Reviewer: ravenclaw_girl101 Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 12:52PM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls Nice job. Keep up the good work :) Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 11:45AM Title: Chapter 4 – Big balls I like the connection between the Malfoy's ire and the press' vilification of Harry. I do think that you made Ginny too bitchy: insulting Daphne's appearance --and later, Pansy's-- was low class, unattractive and unnecessary. People who speak of others like that are not people I admire or want to hang out with. Ginny screaming at Sharon and punching her is too, too soap opera/B-movie. While I like the final scene, the lead-up to it didn't need to be so over the top. | |||||||
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