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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.03.05 - 07:06AM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Loved the scene between Harry and Muriel. She has always reminded me very strongly of a magical version of my grandmother. Looking forward to the hen and stag parties. I am worried about what trouble Robbie will get into with those little blue pills.

Author's Response: The one and only time I've ever written about Muriel. Strange...



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.19 - 10:05PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.05.28 - 03:34AM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Can't wait for the stag/hen parties! I loved Harry standing up to Muriel - someone needs to stand up to the old bat.

Author's Response: I loved writing Muriel. Another character I must use again!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.10.24 - 06:43AM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Although Ginny is staying in Britian, I think her herons night could be quite interesting as she has a team full of Harpies with her. Anything could happen!!
Loved the way Harry told Muriel off. I could just imagine Harry getting a bit angry at being told what was 'expected' of Ginny and himself. Also, the fork poking would drive anyone nuts.
Looking forward to the hens/stag nights and the wedding.

Author's Response: Is there a difference between a herons night and a hen night? Is one bigger than the other or something?



Reviewer: Dando Signed Date: 2012.10.21 - 02:39PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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*sigh* "rogered senseless in the shower"....takes me back.... great chapter. I loved Auntie Muriel in this and the way Harry socked it to her. She got right up my nose in the book. Now, I'm dying to see what happens with that Viagra

Author's Response: I think I should flag up a health warning at this point: - *warning to all readers* Having sex in the shower can be extremely hazardous and should be approached with caution. Please ensure that adhesive matting is in place under your feet at all times and that suitable handrails are available to grab should you overbalance. Also ensure that the shower stall is of sturdy construction and will not collapse if pressure is applied against it. Thank you for your attention.



Reviewer: crystaltips1 Signed Date: 2012.10.21 - 11:14AM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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I'm betting on Ginny having the better night .

Your not going to give poor Harry trouser problems with those blue pills?.

Enjoyed Harry ear bashing Muriel ( I think Harry post Voldy would have stood up for himself
a lot more,and would have told the old bat where to go.)

Really looking forward to the Next Couple of Chapters .

Author's Response: Trouser problems? What, you mean like all the creases in them suddenly vanishing or something? I’m saying nothing, CT. You seem to be second guessing me a bit too well.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.10.20 - 12:46PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

LOL. What a fun chapter. Gwenog was brilliant. Enjoyed Harry taking notes about weddings. Hermione in the Harpies den was quite amusing too. I don't trust Robbie. However, if he knows what's best for his health, he won't mess with Harry. Ginny might not appreciate it.

Author's Response: Poor Robbie. Everyone seems to think the worst about him. Of course, everyone might just be right! But don’t worry, he’s not malicious, just a bit stupid…



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2012.10.19 - 04:29PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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I loved Harry standing up to Murial and her reaction - brilliant.

Author's Response: You can only push a Potter so far!



Reviewer: Imperator 277 Signed Date: 2012.10.19 - 02:53PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Great chapter. Loved the Murial scene. Kudos for giving Harry the balls to stand up to Murial like that. I am a little confused about some of the dialect in this chapter: "Rogered her senseless" Care to translate? I am looking forward to seeing the bachelor/bachelorette parties. Hope there won't be any "Hangover" elements cause THAT would cause some problems, even though it would be funny knowing those two parties. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Oh, come on! Muriel’s talking about Ginny being unsullied for her wedding. They were in the shower – naked. Can’t you guess what ‘Rogered her senseless’ means? Diagrams will be available only on request ;-)



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2012.10.19 - 08:33AM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Loved Aunt Muriel! You write her very well and I had a good chuckle over her assessment of Harry as Ginny's fiance. However, Harry's response takes the cake. Who would have thought the old bat would be satisfied by someone standing up to her?

Poor Ginny, her hen night sounds fabulous, but I think she's disappointed that Gwenog took things to hand and wouldn't let Hermione do her matron of honor duties. Sounds like the old adage, "once bitten, twice shy," is at work here with Gwenog trying to do some pre-emptive damage control. As for Harry's stag night, with all the Weasley brothers in attendence, it'll be fun to see what sort of mischief takes place on their trip.

One last comment, I sincerely hope nothing goes wrong with the raid that ended this chapter. I fear that a total of twelve Aurors isn't going to be enough to stop Harry being turned into a purple slug by the end of it!

Great chapter! I look forward to the next one.

Author's Response: I like to think that Muriel knows exactly what she’s doing and just enjoys getting a rise out of people. I can image her enjoying someone standing up to her once in a while. In the next chapter we’ll get to see the stag and hen night unfold consecutively. Who will have the better night, I wonder? And don’t worry, the raid went smoothly. Unless you count Robbie’s little theft, of course…



Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2012.10.18 - 03:51PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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I loved how Harry stood up to Muriel - it was brilliant. Great job. Can't wait to see what transpires on the stag and hen nights :)

Author's Response: I liked Muriel. She’s got that whole ‘when I’m old I shall wear purple’ thing happening, hasn’t she? Chapter 12 is being beta’d even as I write.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.10.18 - 06:52AM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Another fun chapter. I loved the scene with Harry and Muriel. Harry's response was priceless! I'm curios now what sort of trouble Robbie is going to cause? Can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response: I enjoyed writing Harry’s response actually. Just to get in character I was shouting at the computer screen as I typed it, trying to imagine Muriel’s face in front of me. To be fair this is a writing style I developed at work where people are use to me yelling and swearing at my computer. Perhaps I should switch to decaf?



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.10.18 - 04:25AM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Looking forward to the hen party.

Author's Response: Yes, it will be a lovely event with plenty of cups of tea in nice china cups and maybe the odd slice of cake. Or something.



Reviewer: redandblack Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 10:16PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Haha good for Harry to have enough balls to stand to Muriel, can't wait for next chapter.

Author's Response: I really wanted Harry to have a right go at Muriel during the wedding in DH, but I guess he’s just too well mannered. My version of Harry, however, has no such problem.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 08:46PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

Well it's nice to see that someone has the sence to keep the harpies in check, but poor Ginny,,,,as for Harry well Robby is going to die if he gets it in to Harry's system,,,,and not my Harry but by Ginny.......kutgw

Author's Response: Hmm, my little magical Viagra cliff-hanger seems to be causing some interest! Just remember, though Robbie is an Auror, he is also a bit of an idiot. With that in mind don’t be surprised what he does with the pills.



Reviewer: ravenclaw_girl101 Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 08:01PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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Hmm, Ibiza sounds fun.

Author's Response: Don’t count your chickens etc…



Reviewer: Kimbovet Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 07:51PM Title: Chapter 11 – Lunatics and Gentleman’s Sausages

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I absolutely loved the Harry & Muriel scene. Poor Ginny getting stuck with a local hen night while Harry gets to go to Ibiza. Of course with Robbie scooping up the "little blue pills" the stag party might be a bit more exciting than Harry would like.

Author's Response: Oh, it’s always a hard choice, Anglesey or Ibiza? Still, we shall have to see who ends up having the best time out of the two of them.




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