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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.01 - 03:48AM Title: Duels

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Ron seems to be getting a bit more confident. How old is he now? Thirteen, right? His relationship with Hermione is also interesting. Usually, he is a bit short-tempered, but when it comes to Hermione, he is much more uncomplaining. It is an interesting approach. I'm curious to see how it will develop.
I hope that the house elves are keeping an eye on Slughorn. I'm not sure how far he can be trusted.
Many thank for another great chapter!


Author's Response: Ron is more mature in this story and more confident with Hermione. It all relates to not having Harry as best friends with Hermione.There has been other changes in the Weasley family dynamic, such as Percy isn't as much of a prat and Ministry worshiper because he saw the seamy side of the Ministry. M.V.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.12.05 - 08:35AM Title: Duels

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Great to see another marvellous chapter.
Slughorn has always been a coward, out for his own gains and benefits.
Snape and Draco had their arrogance handed to them by a 'blood traitor '. How will they be able to show their faces, again?
Looking forward to the next fabulous chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the compliments. Hopefully. it won't be long before the next chapter is up. M.V.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.12.04 - 05:55AM Title: Duels

Ah Draco never did learn quickly nor did shape....fare is fare and maybe snape needs to reevaluate his priorities in order to make the right calls from now on.....kutgw

Author's Response: They are both stuck in that Slytherin state of mind. M.V.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.12.03 - 05:45PM Title: Duels

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Reviewer: hptrump Signed Date: 2014.12.03 - 02:19PM Title: Duels

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Good chapter. Awesome to see a new chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am glad you are enjoying my story. M.V.




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