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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 06:35PM Title: Fighting amongst Allies

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What a mess. Harry and Ginny are handling everything in the best way they can, but it is not going well because of the queen's guard, the goblins, and the deatheaters. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Author's Response: Every one is testing to see if Harry and the Order are competent. Thank you for the review. M.V.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.01.16 - 03:46PM Title: Fighting amongst Allies

Some things are easy some are hard, and some are just plain painfull. Harry and siruis and mad eye just had what they wanted but the guards just got it back, in a way...now harry is going to need to talk and fast and get the queen to put up or shut them up fast....kutgw

Author's Response: It appears that these people ust can't get along without trying to kill each other. At least at this point of the story. The Queen will do the right thing and it will be a simple solution. Thank you for the review. M.V.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.01.12 - 10:13PM Title: Fighting amongst Allies

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Glad Harry remembered the lessons about the goblins. He saved the Wizards from having two battles at once.
The queen doesn't sound as though she trusts the Wizards at all. She stood back while her guards attacked Sirius, knowing that he was connected to Harry, somehow. Even after Ginny told her about him being Harry's godfather, she did nothing. The muggles seem extremely over sure of themselves.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Bill was also glad that Harry remembered enough to not offend Grins. They now have the goblins on their side, but they will still want their forty bodies. The Queen was being rather stiff necked in this chapter because she knew she was being lied to. Hopkins and Mike were acting on their own. She used it as motivation as to why they are so afraid of Voldemort. Thank you for the review. M.V.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.01.12 - 07:35AM Title: Fighting amongst Allies

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The idea to solve problems with bombs sounds very Muggle-like. Apparently the Potters can no longer rely on the cooperation with the Queen. On the other hand, the alliance with the goblins probably is even more important for them. Perhaps the battles in the Gringotts caves provide the opportunity to collect a horcrux from one of the vaults. We will see...
I am curious if Poppy can heal an injury caused by a Muggle gun.
Thank you very much for a suspenseful chapter, unfortunately with not much progress in the matter. But this isn't bad at all, since it prolongs our reading fun, right?

Author's Response: The problems with forming alliances is that they sometimes demand things to remain in alliance. Harry and the wizards must come up with forty victims. That will not be an easy choice. The Muggles are not completely out of the picture, either. In this story, Poppy can heal a gunshot wound. Bill going in and fgihting alongside the goblins might just prove beneficial. Thank you for the review. M.V.



Reviewer: nesciamema Signed Date: 2016.01.12 - 12:51AM Title: Fighting amongst Allies

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Can't wait to see how they handle the queen and her idiot guards.

Author's Response: The worst is over with the guards. They were two people who didn't trust anyone that wasn't normal. Lets face it, the magical community isn't what us Muggles would call normal. M.V.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2016.01.11 - 10:02PM Title: Fighting amongst Allies

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Interesting chapter



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. M.V.




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