Reviews For Memories & the Stone
Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2017.05.17 - 08:05PM Title: Chapter 6 I'm so glad he came to a realization about the hateful annoying bookworm Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.10.25 - 01:38PM Title: Chapter 6 I like hearing Harry's thoughts about his potential new friends and I'm glad he has a bit of a back bone. Most of this chapter is a rehash of canon which in some ways is unavoidable, but what is different your world? Emphasize those differences - why is Snape trying to break into his mind? Why is Neville so much more confident? Those are good ideas, but not well expanded upon. Let us see your story, not JKR's story. Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2015.09.01 - 07:34AM Title: Chapter 6 Very good chapter. Harry is right to not want to be friend wit Hermione without she change some of her attittudes. Hermone's extremely bossy, narrow minded and also a bit jeaolus. I's so good that he befriended Neville too. Hope Harry will do better with help of his dreams. Looking forward to the next chapter. Reviewer: KateP Signed Date: 2015.03.20 - 10:32PM Title: Chapter 6 Have to say you have me intrigued over the dreams of the future Harry is having what are they is he just going to get each year before the start of that year I will be very interested in finding out how he came by this Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2015.03.13 - 03:50AM Title: Chapter 6 Just found this story. Interesting plot device for an AU story, I'll enjoy seeing how it plays out. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.03.12 - 07:17AM Title: Chapter 6 Well I feel sorry for hermione but I think Harry brings up a very good point in hermione needs to learn the lesson but at what cost....kutgw | |||||||
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