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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.12.14 - 06:33PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Yeah, Ginny finally has a wand that actually works. It looks like it is going to be Harry and Ginny against the world, particularly since they seem to have no one else to depend upon.

Author's Response: They still have a few friends left... just no one of adult age. I never trust adults, which is why I refuse to become one, even though I'm 48.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.20 - 08:48PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2013.04.18 - 12:45AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Reviewer: bingo007 Signed Date: 2013.04.04 - 01:48PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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looks like i am a little late to the review party.anyway i thought the chap wasnt too fluffy as u said but it wasnt on the other end of the spectrum either.it hd a decent amount of fluff and i liked it.
i am surprised that ginny initiated the kiss seeng that this is her first one,maybe this is another sign of her showing her true self.
cant wait for the next chapter but feeling sad that the adventure will be over in a few more chapters.

Author's Response: I’m just glad that you saw some fluffiness in the chapter at all! I really should be more careful what I say in my author’s notes. There’s a bit more of this story to go; 7 more full chapters plus the epilogue, so it will be around for a little while yet.



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2013.04.04 - 09:26AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Loved it!
I know, everybody asked you about it been "fluffy" so let me add in my voice of support :) You call it "fluffy" ?:) I personally think you got confused with all that Easter bunny business and all!

Now, things i did like:
1.Ron got some taste of Harry's medicine, i am sure he will require repeat dose to be cured
2.Ginny now knows that her family treated her almost as bad as Dursleys
3.New WAND!!!

Please don't hold out on us with next chapter, i kind of torn beween wanting to find out what is going to happen and wishing we did not have just few chapters left..sequel may be?


Author's Response: Maybe I did suffer from a sugar rush, but I still say any chapter that contains Harry and Ginny’s first kiss has to be a bit fluffy. And no-one died: super fluffy! I’m afraid the way that I end this story doesn’t really lend itself to a sequel, but I’m pretty certain most people will like the ending. Besides, sitting on my hard drive I have a nearly completed 13 chapter story about Harry as an Auror, 2 short stories (one of which is incredibly silly), another story in the early planning stage and I’ve just started another one having been attacked by a rabid plot bunny. The last thing I need is to start doing a sequel to this one, too!



Reviewer: ecocdavid Signed Date: 2013.04.03 - 11:20PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Been reading your stories for the past few weeks and I'm loving them! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Author's Response: Glad you’re enjoying them. You keep reading and I’ll keep writing!



Reviewer: waywardkitty42 Signed Date: 2013.04.02 - 10:06AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Great chapter! Finally, Ron notices that Harry and Ginny are hanging. I'll be interested to see what everyone makes of Harry buying Ginny a new wand. I was half thinking that Harry might "accidentally" break Ginny's wand so he'd have an excuse to replace it.

Generally, I'm liking your confident, capable Harry. Super-Harry stories kind of bug me. They just get the character too far from his book character for my taste. This Harry strikes a more believable balance, IMO.

Author's Response: I’ve tried to make Harry a product of his education and, more importantly, his teachers. The Flamels arrived at a point when he needed love as much as teaching and their influence has made Harry a warmer, more stable person. Lisa probably helped in that regard, too. Tamazuki taught him to be a fighter but more importantly taught him to trust his instincts and his heart. Harry was never going to become arrogant with him as a teacher. Finally, Sirius (as well as Remus and Tonks) became family to him and taught him how to relax and have fun, while being there for him through the bad times. With that lot mentoring Harry, there was no way he was going to turn out to be a bad apple.



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 11:40PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Love, love, LOVE this story!
Can't wait for the fireworks between Ginny and her family. As a mom I am SOOOO mad at Molly right now....how could she have not tried to investigate any possible way to help her daughter...arghhh!
Thank you for sharing your most excellent story with us! An update always makes my day!

Author's Response: Don’t you know that Molly is ALWAYS right, no exceptions? Snigger. Sadly, Molly will always believe that she knows better than her daughter, and perhaps she’s been taken in by Percy‘s words as well. All her other children have probably used hand-me-down wands and they did alright, so she just assumes the problem is with Ginny. It will be a little while before the fireworks, chapter 26 in fact, but it should be fun when they arrive.



Reviewer: zequist Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 09:40PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Another excellent chapter! Great job moving the story forward, setting up the plot points, and conveying all the necessary information without getting overly wordy or repeating too much of what we (the readers) already knew. Never thought I'd actually enjoy a fight between Harry and Ron the way I enjoyed that one.

Okay, time to have some fun inventing theories based on the hints you've set up:

Molly theory #1: She's a massive helicopter parent towards her "little girl," and regardless of whether or not she has any inkling of the broken wand being the cause, she really isn't all that bothered by Ginny having trouble with spells because it keeps Ginny dependent on her for that much longer and a woman's first priority should be her home and family prospects over her job and career prospects anyway.
Molly theory #2: She's not a helicopter, but simply an extremely stubborn, proud, hidebound woman who could not/would not accept the idea that any new wand could possibly be more powerful, useful, or durable than a treasured family possession, and insisted on fulfilling her dreams of Ginny receiving all her heirlooms and passing them along again to her children in the future, all to Ginny's cost.
I'm not sure which scenario makes her look worse, but whichever one it is, I'm sure that's the one you've chosen. ;-)

Arthur theory #1: He didn't mention Malfoy and the protection act because there wasn't anything that could be done about it and he didn't want any of his sons to do anything stupid that might provoke Malfoy further (like looking for revenge) and possibly get himself or the entire family into even worse trouble.
Arthur theory #2: He didn't mention Malfoy and the protection act because he's taking a lose-the-battle, keep-the-war-going long view and didn't want his failure to discourage his children from continuing to fight for muggle rights.
Arthur theory #3: He didn't mention Malfoy and the protection act because he genuinely didn't think it was all that important - the mere fact that he was unfairly sacked was all that mattered, not the details of how and why, and it never occurred to him how children often internalize guilt feelings even for things that are beyond their control.
1 or 2 would be rather Dumbledorian, putting the greater good of his entire family and their ideals above Ginny's immediate needs for comfort and reassurance. Understandable, if a bit cold. I like 3 less because all that does is mark him as naive and insensitive.

Draco Malfoy theory #1: He is a git.
Draco Malfoy theory #2: He deserves to have his arse kicked from Aberdeen to Brighton (with his father right behind him).
Actually, we already know those are true. Moving on...

*Ron theory #1: The next time he tries to push Harry around or interfere he's going to find himself, to his complete shock, on the receiving end of one very fat, nasty bat bogey hex courtesy of Ginny (Miss Weasley if you're nasty).
*Ron theory #2: His contraband connections will actually prove useful for Harry's side before the war is over.
So you didn't really hint at either of those, but I like the possibilities for fun that they offer.


Author's Response: My word, you have been thinking about this a lot, haven’t you? Well, in answer to your theories: - Molly theory: err, it of both, really. I’ll say up front that Molly doesn’t realise that the wand is defective. She just remembers her mother doing wonderful magic with it and it seemed to be working fine after Ollivander repaired it. Maybe she missed him telling her that the fix was temporary or perhaps she just convinced herself that it would be fine. She is, however, a smothering, controlling parent whose protective instincts went through the roof after the CoS. You’re probably right that she would like Ginny to follow in her footsteps and be a housewitch with a big family. Career? What do you need one of those for, my girl? Arthur theory: Sorry, 3 is closest. Now, don’t think for a moment that Arthur gathered his family after he was sacked with the intension of piling blame on Ginny. But perhaps after he saw the fear and disappointment in the eyes of his children, he decided to emphasise the less damning reasons for his dismissal. And then when Percy started laying in on Ginny suddenly the blame started shifting elsewhere… I’m sure there isn’t a day that goes by that Arthur feel guilty about not setting the records straight. Draco theory: nearly right, it rhymes with git but has four letters. Ron theory: Nope, wrong on both counts although Ron’s smuggling knowledge will prove useful for some other people at the end. Oh, and someone else gets to be the first recipient of Ginny’s new, improved bat bogey hexes (and amazingly it’s not Draco, either). Please feel free to speculate on anything else that will happen. Want to take a stab at what happened to Dumbedore?



Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 04:26PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Well, if this is the fluffiest chapter, then there won't be much fluff in the story. There certainly hasn't been much so far. That's not a complaint; just an observation. It's an enjoying one to read.

So, the butterfly wings that blew Harry out of his arrival at Hogwarts at age eleven has certainly had an effect on the place. I assume you just wanted to change one small thing, and everything would flow differently based on that change. One of the big things I see changed is the character of Dumbledore. He was manipulative and controlling in canon, but he's much more diabolical here - to the point of arranging the demise of Remus and Sirius. Was Harry's presence at Hogwarts sufficient to quell Dumbledore's worst "end justifies the means" traits, or do you suspect he was always this bad in canon, but it wasn't visible from Harry's perspective? He seemed remorseful in the books, but was that just superb acting that naive Harry couldn't see through? The Dumbledore in your story doesn't seem like the type to sacrifice himself to allow Snape to be a better-trusted spy against Voldemort, even if he is dying.

Interestingly, I can see the changes in the other characters flow well from not having Harry at Hogwarts. I'm saddened by the changes to Ron, but they're understandable. I'd like to think that he can change to be a better person, but that may take a large life-event to make it happen (like fighting a troll to save a girl, for instance). I don't know in canon where Snape found out about the horcruxes and their destruction, but I assume he's not been told in this story, and therefore he may be more inclined to side with the Death Eaters as a result.

The whole butterfly wing analogy is suspect in many ways. It depends on the sensitivity of the system, I suppose. Drop a pebble in a river, and the ripples quickly die away. Drop a pebble on a steep mountain slope, and the avalanche starts an hour early, just before Hitler's young parents leave the vacation chalet in it's path. But without a Hilter, would a Heinrich Himmler simply take over and build a third Reich in his place? So no real change. Or maybe that Himmler-led Germany would succeed in concurring Russia, and would then destroy the world in nuclear fire (maybe you can tell I'm a child of the cold war). What if's are just that --- What If. It's indeterminable.

Enjoying reading this. I'm feeling guilty, because the chapters are coming faster than my reviews. I'll work to get better on that.


Author's Response: I really should have paraphrased that line ‘… or at least as fluffy as I get!’ Hey, no-one was killed in it, so it must be fluffy! Now, your review really got me thinking about the whole ‘Butterfly Effect’ thing and you are completely correct; the small change to Harry’s life has had major repercussions to many people and Hogwarts is completely different, but my changes to Dumbledore predate Harry’s outburst of accidental magic. The fact is there IS a reason why Dumbledore is so different in this story, but we haven’t seen it yet. There’s a flashback scene later to something that happened to Dumbledore to change his way of thinking. The more I think about it, the more I think my ‘pebble dropped in water creating ripples’ imagery was wrong. A better image would be a badly thrown skipping stone that makes one large splash before skipping slightly further and then sinking below the surface. Harry’s accident would have been the stone sinking, while the repercussions of the large splash are still being felt. Wish I’d thought of this earlier!



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 03:54PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Fabulous comeuppance for Ron et al.

Author's Response: Ron’s down, but not out. Next time he’s going to get sneaky…



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 02:13PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

OK! I'll go with the Rosetti of Reads then! Or maybe the Paganini of Prose? Either way, this story ROCKS!!! :):):)

Author's Response: Either of those will work for me! Thanks!!



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 10:14AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Now this story really is going somewhere. Harry and Ginny against the world (with Luna and Hermione, of course)! Can't wait to see who Harry takes on next. Ginny has got a huge bone to pick with her family. Don't think they are going to like it one bit either.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Whose next on Harry’s list? Well, we don’t appear to have seen that charming young Draco chappie yet, have we?



Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 10:07AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Very happy to see Ginny now has a wand that truly belongs to her. Guess I'll have to wait and see why everyone seems to have it out for Ginny, especially her parents. I guess that one was a bit of a shocker but I will wait to see what comes. Interested i seeing where this goes with Ron/Harry.

Author's Response: There isn’t a specific reason that Ginny’s parents are ‘out to get her’; I just had Ginny thinking that’s how it felt. Her situation has been driven by a number of interlinked events: being given a defective wand, being possessed by the diary, taking the fall for her father’s sacking. There’s a reason for all these things and it’s only when they are all combined does poor Ginny’s life look like a train wreck. Everything will be summarised when she confronts her family at Xmas.



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 08:56AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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“Lisa?” Ginny asked jealously.

I was tempted to do an 'April fool' review but I'll settle for a little teasing. Seriously, I think she'd be more curious than jealous at this point. After their kiss, I think she's just hoping there isn't a 'prior claim' on Harry. By the way, I'm not buying the 'she missed his cheek' excuse. I think it is more of 'got a little carried away' type of moment. She has a good excuse for some euphoria after what you've put her through, you mean writer you! I'm just teasing again but I can't vouch for my reaction when I learn more about what you've done to Luna. She's a character that tends to make me feel protective. I do agree she'd be a very tempting target though.

Author's Response: Why does everyone always call me a meanie? I admit that I am essentially quite evil, but there’s no need for everyone to point that out! You’ll get nowhere in the jealousy stakes; as soon as Ginny heard Lisa used to beat the stuffing out of Harry during Taekwondo, she recognised a kindred spirit. Maybe Ginny and Lisa could team up and get a bit rough with Harry, he may like that! If it’s any conciliation I feel really bad about being cruel to Luna, but let’s face it, she couldn’t be a bigger target even if she had a bull’s-eye painted on her back. I do promise that she gets pay back in a very gruesome fashion, however.



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 07:18AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Well, I liked the last two chapter. Guess i'll start to read from here :D.

Author's Response: Sigh, I swear the next story I post will have Harry and Ginny together from chapter 1. The public have spoken… ;-)



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 03:15AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Started this earlier today. Quite an enjoyable tale!

Thanks for the gift...

Author's Response: Ah, another review by a name I haven’t seen for a while. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 02:32AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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This is such a great story, and has been from the first chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Glad you’re enjoying it and thank you for your kind words.



Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed Date: 2013.04.01 - 12:37AM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Another good chapter. Good to see Ron get his comeuppance; Harry is going to get a reputation if he goes around beating up all the bullies. And while the second half of the chapter was very fluffy, I loved it. I'm glad Harry could show Ginny that she is truly strong magically and that her father's sacking wasn't her fault. I wonder if the Weasley's insistence on Ginny using a weak wand and taking the blame has to do with believing that she should grow up to be a housewife like Molly and not get her own job out of independence. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I’m quite certain that Molly believes that Ginny should grow up to be a Housewitch, even if that probably wasn’t her motivation for passing the wand onto her daughter. Family is everything to Molly and Ginny using her mother’s wand would be a very appealing idea for her. As far as Molly is concerned there’s nothing wrong with the wand. This will be discussed further!



Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2013.03.31 - 10:01PM Title: Chapter 23 – In Truth You Will Find Joy

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Is it completely wicked of me that I was hoping Lisa would show up on the beach? Loved the scene between Harry and Ron's gang; it was a well-deserved dressing down, but I am sure it is far from over between them. I am saddened that they aren't off to such a great start, as I really like Ron in canon, and despite some of his character flaws that made him less than the greatest friend at times, I truly think he was a good friend to Harry and vice versa. I'm curious to see how you will portray them and I wonder if there is any hope of them being good friends in this universe, as their life experiences have been so disparate to date.

While I like how Harry and Ginny's relationship is progressing, I was surprised she accepted the wand so readily, no matter how much she wanted it. I don't believe canon Ginny would have done so, and I would think this Ginny would expect some stings attached to such an extravagant gift, even if it is from a noble gentleman such as Harry. I don't think she knows him well enough to automatically accept that he is a nice guy, I think you have created a universe that would have jaded her a bit more towards men. Just my two cents, which usually aren't worth much :)


Thank you for the Easter present, I hope Mrs. Brennus had her fill of chocolate, and thanks much for having Harry kick Ron to the curb.



Author's Response: Well, I did start writing the beach scene with a view to Lisa turning up with her new Muggle boyfriend, but it served no purpose really and just seemed like too much of a coincidence. You are right in assuming that Ron is not finished causing trouble just yet but he will learn his lesson eventually. Don’t judge this version of Ron until the final chapter as he may just come good at the end. As for Ginny accepting the wand, well, it’s a difficult one. I don’t think that even in canon Ginny would be as touchy about money as Ron would be. A new wand would be a massive temptation for her and I think the idea that she would be able to help stand up to the Slytherins with it pushed her over the edge. You’re probably right that she’s a bit distrustful of boys but she does have a connection with Harry already (even if she can’t totally remember all the details) which perhaps allows her to believe in him more. Mrs Brennus now has more chocolate then she knows what to do with. This morning we went shopping in Southampton and the local branch of Hotel Chocolate was having a half-price sale. For all my moaning about my lack of chocolate yesterday I’m swimming in it now!




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