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Reviewer: Forge2 Signed Date: 2022.11.30 - 09:04AM Title: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

I'm interested in how your version of bonding plays a part in the story, and I felt like Percy's formal apology and the twins' informal response were quite on point. Good stuff!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! The bonding grew out of my feelings about how love functions as both human emotion and magic. This chapter represents the introduction of that concept in the story. Further chapters will explore its functions in both magical marriage and and magic itself, And, as the chapter title suggests Percy's return was pivotal to the chapter itself allowing me to explore the Weasley familiar dynamic, which I love as a portrait of family. Thank you for your comments and for you reading!!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.01.05 - 01:47PM Title: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

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Oh well, it's good to see that the horcrux hunt continues, at least the planning part.
I wonder why Harry asked Hermione about Bonding, I wonder even more why he thought it would be inappropriate to ask Ginny. He is (almost) of age, he should ask the girl he loves, at least he has confirmed that he loves her and that he 'is sure, very sure'. Or is he really still the little boy, whom Moody sees in him?
Great chapter! Thank you!

Yikes, I was so annoyed about Harry that I nearly forgot:
I'm glad that the Weasley had the chance to reunite, especially in the actual situation where nobody knows what will happen next in the wizarding world.

Author's Response: Interesting... I would never have anticipated annoyance with Harry based on this chapter. Why discuss it with Hermione, and not Ginny? Very simple... Hermione is his source for any information... she has always occupied the role of the information giver in the relationship... where as, Ginny is indeed the girl he loves, and he would not ask her about this sort of bonding 1) Because he would not want her to get the idea that he is presently looking to bond with her in this way. (Even if he were.) 2) Because he doesn't want to admit up front to the girl he loves, that he knows nothing about the whole concept, when she may well be anticipating that such a bonding may eventually occur between them. and lastly) The whole encounter was really one of convenience anyway. He happened to overhear a conversation which created questions, and then he happened immediately upon a trusted friend, who usually has answers. So he asked. There was nothing sneaky or conniving about it. And, while he is not the little boy Moody treats him as, neither is he the grown man that the Wizard world wants him to be.
Thanks for reading and commenting.



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2013.03.26 - 03:13AM Title: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

Poor Fleur, she just not in her niche with Weasleys:)) except for Bill, she just doesn't fit it..I am looking forward to the actual wedding, it will be interesting to see how you are going to play it.

Author's Response: The wedding is not to far away now! I hope you will enjoy it. Having Helena around will help I suppose, but there is just not getting around she is not much like the Weasleys by nature. Still, she has been accepted into the clan.

Thanks for the read and the comments!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.03.25 - 09:21PM Title: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

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Just found your great story and it is very well thought out.
Love the idea of Draco having to prove himself and to be starting to question his past beliefs.
Harry's manor sounds incredible.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story, and most especially for taking the time to comment. I do hope I will see many more comments from you in the future. I am so glad you seem to be enjoying it!



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2013.03.23 - 04:17AM Title: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

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I like how you develop the story but I wish you could give Ginny a bit more prominent place. She does not seems to be involved that much and mostly in background...
I am also curious about Harry's grandmother, you just tached on her , Luna and seer business slightly. I wonder why they have not asked about yet, may be soon?

Author's Response: Harry remains the central character here, and though Ginny plays a much stronger role in this story than she did DH don't look for her to gain much more prominence than Ron, or Hermione. Maybe toward the end a little, but mostly the trio has turned in to a quartet. About Harry's Grandmother and her relationship to Luna... The Lovegood's will be attending Bill and Fleur's wedding so you can look forward to Luna meeting her great Aunt's portrait in that chapter. Thanks for reading and commenting!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2013.03.20 - 10:18AM Title: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

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Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2013.03.19 - 07:45PM Title: Chapter 15 - Weasleys Reunited

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You're catching up fast here! I remember commenting on that last line fairly recently. Congratulations on the award, it is well deserved.

Author's Response: Thank you. And, yes I am catching up very quickly. The chapter I am working on has been giving me lots of trouble, I think I am on my fifth or sixth rewrite attempt. Not to mention life getting in the way. I hope to have it off to you real soon... but than again I have said that before haven't I?

Thanks for commenting.




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