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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.01.12 - 03:28AM Title: Chapter 22 - Relics

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Ah yes, the annual Hogwarts letters. It's good that everyone has got a job, so no one can be grumpy.
The treasure hunt was quite adventurous. I'm glad that Ginny hasn't allowed Harry to apparate alone. The two of them are more and more attentive to each other, and I like it.
I'm sure that it does not matter, but I'm curious about the location of the cavern. I'm pretty sure that it is not somewhere below the Manor.
I'd suspected that the Heart of the Hero will be found during he treasure hunt, and I'm still looking forward, what it is all about. However, I suppose that it will take them a bit longer to find it out. On the other hand, I guess that the books contain the greater mysteries, and hopefully also the solutions to the mysteries.

Author's Response: Well... what can I say, you were right. Now it remains to be seen how it will fit in to the story. We will also have the books and Caracticus' battle axe to contend with.
At least one part of the treasure caverns is indeed somewhere below the manor. The round chamber into which they Apparate is in a direct downward line, but the rest of the caverns only begin from there.
I am so gload that you are enjoying my little tale. Thank you for the reading and the review.



Reviewer: v_t Signed Date: 2015.07.04 - 12:30AM Title: Chapter 22 - Relics

Glad your back to writing. I had to reread to refresh my memory. Sorry about your loss. I loved Luna dancing with the pixies. Looking forward to future chapters.

Author's Response: I am very happy to be back! Dancing with the fairies seemed a very Luna thing to do. There is more to come for her and those adorable creatures. Thank you for your kind thoughts.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.07.03 - 11:07PM Title: Chapter 22 - Relics

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Very interesting chapter.
Just finished reading the last couple of chapters to remind me of the plot.
This find should, hopefully, be beneficial towards Harry's final confrontation.
Looking forward to more.

Hope RL begins to go with you now instead of against you. Good luck.

Author's Response: Thank you for the very kind words. I am glad to be back.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.07.02 - 11:52AM Title: Chapter 22 - Relics

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This is definitely an adventuresome chapter that gets multiple characters involved. I like how every works together to help Harry find what he's looking for. I hope that what he found will be beneficial to his quest for survival past the inevitable class with Voldemort. Well done. I look forward to chapter twenty-three.

Author's Response: Thanks!! It is my hope that I will be able to do right by all of the characters and keep them growing as they move forward. I really tried to use Luna in this chapter and develop what she has to contribute to the group. Hopefully the characterization rings true to what was laid down in canon.




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