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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2016.01.12 - 03:53AM
Title: Chapter 23 - Godric's Hollow
Oops, Harry wants to build a private army. Or does he want to give Scrimgeour money for an army? To be honest, I don't like any of these ideas. Such a private army is a power factor that sometime will endanger any society, even if it belongs to a Harry Potter. What would happen to such an army when Ol' Tom was defeated?
These are things that Harry most certainly doesn't want, but which are to be considered.
Luna is truly unique. She is probably the only one who really understands the fairies.
Godric's Hollow is certainly not the place Harry has imagined. You've made a real magical tourist hell of it, lol. I wonder then, however, that there never was a Death Eater raid on such a prominent Harry Potter related place.
The theories for creating magical paintings sounded really interesting.
Many thanks for another great chapter!
Author's Response: Very valid points about the Army. What happens after the need is done? These are delicate questions which will eventually be answered. Luna is indeed unique and though I intend to evolve her I hope that I will be able to maintain her uniqueness.
Godric's Hollow was fun to write, it was all part of exploring fame and it's not so pretty side. It has always seemed to me that Rowling didn't truly appreciate the effects of fame on he own character she made Harry famous, but never really exposed him to what it meant, except for a little bit in book four. I am just trying to catch him up. Why would Voldemort attack a tourist trap? it seems to me that last place Harry would be found.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: yentila22 Signed
Date: 2015.09.18 - 12:48AM
Title: Chapter 23 - Godric's Hollow
Your story is incredible. I've read this on several different occasions loving it each time. I'm glad that you are not abandoning it you are a wonderful writer
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. Do not worry, I have no plans to abandon this story. Life will happen, but I will always come back to this until it is done.
Reviewer: demonesprit Signed
Date: 2015.09.15 - 01:39AM
Title: Chapter 23 - Godric's Hollow
I found this on the list of recent updates and started reading.
It's now 1:30 in the morning. :)
This is really great -- a different approach from any of the many fics I've read, with expansions on what JKR created, extensions that fit and that keep everyone in character.
I read a couple of chapters back you had lost your dad. You have my deepest sympathies.
Looking forward to your future updates -- may they be soon!
Author's Response: Sorry to have kept you up... But ever so glad you have found my Fic, and are seeming to like it. I hope you will spread the news that the story exists. I have worked very hard to do just as you say; to expand the HP universe in logical, believable, and hopefully delightful ways, that allow the story to hold together more-or-less canonically.
Thank you so much for joining in on the fun, and I will do my best to stay at it more diligently! ~ JEO
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2015.09.14 - 08:03AM
Title: Chapter 23 - Godric's Hollow
I really like your story. It would have to be one of my favourites.
I feel for poor Harry. He can't even see his parents graves because of the 'Tourist attraction'.
The only problem I see with your story is that it is a while before you update it.
Author's Response: Yes... I know that my updates are a problem. For that I am truly sorry. I can say I will try to do better, but reality doesn't always cooperate. I am glad you like the story, and I promise I will keep writing it. Hope you stick around to read it. Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed
Date: 2015.09.09 - 09:46PM
Title: Chapter 23 - Godric's Hollow
So glad to see a new chapter on one of my fav stories!!! This continues to be just a magnificent story! Thanks for
the new chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: You are welcome, and thank you for sticking with the story in spite of that hap-hazard posting. I will try to do better.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2015.09.09 - 04:12PM
Title: Chapter 23 - Godric's Hollow
I enjoy every chapter of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you, that makes me particularly happy to know.
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