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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.01.13 - 03:08AM Title: Chapter 24 - A Grim Old Place
Mr. Prächts proposal to finance the army sounds much better. In the Muggle world it would be called a government bond, lol.
The way Kreacher is included in the Potter household, is very heartwarming. And with his first good deed Kreacher kills two birds with one stone (or as one would say with us, he kills two flies with one swatter), the locket horcrux and the rune stone.
Great chapter. Thank you!
Author's Response: Mr. Prächt was the perfect vehicle to interject some more logical thinking about financing an army. After all it is his job to look after Potter assets.
Bringing Kreacher in to the fold was always my intention. What to do with him from this point on of course becomes a bit more problematic as it is just more of life, and easy to overlook.
As always, thanks for the read and the review.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.12.01 - 05:56PM Title: Chapter 24 - A Grim Old Place
Interesting chapter.
Author's Response: Just interesting? Doesn't give me much to go on. But, I'll take it, Thanks. Next chapter should be submitted in the next day or so, possibly sooner. Happy reading.
Reviewer: wardwhite Signed Date: 2015.11.30 - 08:41AM Title: Chapter 24 - A Grim Old Place
Great chapter. Keep up the excellent work.
Author's Response: Thank you. Next chapter is in the works, should be finished and off to Betas by tomorrow. Happy reading!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.11.16 - 02:23PM Title: Chapter 24 - A Grim Old Place
Kreacher comes good.
Author's Response: Yeah, well, kinda. I could do a whole chapter on exactly what happened to Kreacher, what the other elves shared with him and just what he thought throughout the process. What looks simple on the surface is actually a complex magical process that communicates thoughts and perceptions in an unblemished truthful form. But, I am not sure who would want to read that in such depth. Thanks so much for the comment.
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Reviewer: demonesprit Signed Date: 2015.11.15 - 10:32PM Title: Chapter 24 - A Grim Old Place
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Author's Response: Thank You!
