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SIYE Time:12:35 on 17th December 2017


Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.07.01 - 06:26AM Title: Chapter 2: Preparations

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Fred and George would definitely be my choice for inventing the cool gadgets. Love the banter between them.



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2013.05.10 - 05:48AM Title: Chapter 2: Preparations

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2013.05.09 - 08:27PM Title: Chapter 2: Preparations

Ah q branch has been at it again...but wait where is the broom with all the special toys in it....kutgw



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2013.05.09 - 01:16PM Title: Chapter 2: Preparations

Enjoying this so far. A couple of notes though.

"I'll give you a written summary later so that you may revise it before infiltration"
I think that should be review, not revise. If you revise something you are changing it.

"not prone to being too useful"
This is a very odd construction, and at the very least I found it to be disconcerting to read... I would suggest leaving it at "not too useful" or "less useful"

- SC

Author's Response: Thank you for your support! Also, I have reviewed the story and done the changes you have suggested.




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