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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2016.10.26 - 06:13PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Yep, definitely some tension going on there!
Author's Response: Just me being smutty.
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed
Date: 2013.07.04 - 09:26AM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
I'm fairly certain I have an idea who the killer is, and that he is doing a very good job of throwing the Aurors off his track. It is taking all of my willpower not to read ahead and see if I am right. I hope that I am not.
Author's Response: Good, I like to see a girl with a bit of discipline!
Reviewer: gemz1313 Signed
Date: 2013.06.20 - 04:45PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
I spy chapter 9 ;)
Not sleeping until it's validated!
Author's Response: Err, this does seem to be a bit of a theme here. I’m sure I only posted chapter 9 a few days ago. And it’s a well-known fact that staring at computer screens does not make archivists work any faster!
Reviewer: lala5 Signed
Date: 2013.06.20 - 04:33PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Come on!! , how long does it take to validate a chapter !-!-!-!
Author's Response: It is mid-week, and I’m sure most of the Archivists have better things to do. Having a validation process does at least keep most of the &*$% that you see on some sites away. Nice that you’re so keen though!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2013.06.20 - 07:49AM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
oh, you are such a cryptic king :)
I have a theory (doesn't everyone) but it's probably totally far fetched, lol
and talk about sexual tension...they're going to have to resolve it soon :)
Author's Response: I’ve been called many things in my life, but never a cryptic king. What are the hours like? Is there a pension plan?
Reviewer: Bethina Signed
Date: 2013.06.19 - 11:05PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
I have the sudden need to take a shower. I'm just not sure if it should be cold or hot and steamy.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
I'm off to the shower...
Author's Response: Sorry, can’t help you with your shower problems. Remember to wash behind your ears, though.
Reviewer: alterdream Signed
Date: 2013.06.19 - 06:58PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Great payback! No, awesome payback :D And poor Susan... not lol This was a great chapter again.
Author's Response: More UST coming in the next chapter.
Reviewer: gemz1313 Signed
Date: 2013.06.19 - 02:10PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
I love flirtatious Harry and Ginny :D
Brilliant chapter, but I'm not closer at all to the killer!
Author's Response: You don’t want to be closer to the killer; he has a sharp, pointy knife!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2013.06.19 - 06:52AM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Fantastic chapter.
But...Oh the (sexual) frustration!!! Both of the Harry and Ginny scenes would have to end this way. LOVED IT!!
Susan's break down doesn't surprise me at all. She seems high maintenance and someone who, if she didn't get her way, would try to get what she wanted, no matter who was in the way. As you can, probably tell, I'm not really a Susan fan. I'm glad Harry stuck to his guns and didn't fall back into old grooves.
I am curious as to whether Harry and Ginny are going to slip up at work and Susan and/or Sonia is going to catch either of them out. Does Susan know that Ginny has moved in with Harry??
Author's Response: Ah, I think you can expect some friendly banter between Ginny and Susan in future chapters. I must confess, I actually really love writing Susan. She’s such a messed up, conflicted, confused mess of a character that she’s really fun to write about. I must introduce more complete ****-up’s in my future stories!
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 09:52PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
So if Harry leaving the Gym were to bump into Ginny leaving the bathroom, do you think they'd even make it as far as a bedroom? ;-)
- SC
Author's Response: Nah, done that. It’s time to move the action into the kitchen!
Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 07:05PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
The clues are starting to make things a bit more clear and I have my guess.
Loved the Harry/Ginny interaction. Their fun flirting seems to be showing Harry just how unhealthy and co-dependent his relationship with Susan really was. And, having them show a little more restraint in the physical department will likely do the same and shows some restraint on your part, as well!
You are doing a great job letting it all unfold. Your story telling, as with your writing, has really improved and matured.
Now, I'll get it over with:
then/than
I will let you find it as flogging you with a wet noddle from across the ocean will require more energy than I have at present. Or, I'm being petty and spiteful over not knowing who the nameless man is!
Author's Response: Just for that I’m not even going to look for my error, so there! And let’s face it, with your list of pet-peeves it’s going to annoy you a lot more than it does me! ;-) Restraint? Me? Surely not. That said, the Archivists haven’t knocked any of my chapters back due to content for ages. Is this a sign of maturity or am I just becoming a wimp in my old age?
Reviewer: Rosina Ferguson Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 06:52PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
I don't like the direction my suspicions are taking me but I won't say any more here.
Naughty naughty H&G. Very suggestive digestive. How many chapters do we have left? Not nearly enough in my opinion.
Author's Response: This story is now officially thirteen chapters long after I realised I was wasting a classic cliff-hanger in a later chapter, plus I keep adding bits as I go along. I’m always fiddling about, me.
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 06:44PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Love it, but I want more! I wish you'd just post the whole thing at the same time. Making me wait is just mean!
Author's Response: But I am mean; I work for a bank, after all.
Reviewer: Cashbash Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 06:43PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Some new clues in this chapter, but I feel a bit like the Aurors – no closer to figuring out the killer’s identity. I think I’m ready to give up and just sit back and enjoy the ride now. And what an enjoyable ride it is! This chapter is a perfect example of why I love Harry and Ginny meeting as adults rather than teens… the tension is delicious. I wonder if their evolving personal relationship is noticeable in the work environment? I imagine Susan and Sonia might have something to say about that soon. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Susan and Sonia might just start picking up on things soon. I totally agree about having Harry and Ginny meeting later in life; I’m not sure I’d be very good at writing a child-like relationship between them. Mind you, you hear of so many teenage pregnancies these days maybe I shouldn’t worry. Ginny up the duff at fourteen: imagine what Molly would say!
Reviewer: nesciamema Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 06:16PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Hilarious payback, poor Ginny.
Author's Response: Hey, she started it!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 06:02PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Ah flirting is so much fun and just one more step closer to being a couple.....kutgw
Author's Response: Assuming they don’t give each other a heart attack first.
Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 05:09PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Uh, wow at this chapter. I think you undersold the sexual tension scenes in your author's note. They made me feel a little hot and bothered. The investigation is going well, but now we've got an original character introduced as a suspect. I'll only be annoyed with the identity of the nameless man if he happens to be a original character because it makes my guessing and theorizing a waste of time if a random name ends up being the murderer. So my fingers are crossed that Woodhouse is innocent and Ernie is just a scumbag lawyer who doesn't know how to make his client appear innocent of a crime he is actually innocent of. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Do you know, only one person so far has come out and actually asked me if the killer is an OC. I will say what I said to her; the killer is linked to a minor canon character. It’s that canon character that you have to work out. Oh, and if that chapter made you hot and bothered you might want to take a lie down before the next one.
Reviewer: LadyPhoenixFireRose Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 04:28PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
I must say, I absolutely loved the scenes between Harry and Ginny. They are completely fantastic.
Okay they have a suspect... I have to say I don't think that it was Healer Woodhouse. It just seems too easy and too obvious, after everything else they are having trouble with. Plus, the killer had no squabbles taking the Squib register, and the info on the patients.. why would he leave such important facts pointing directly to him. Sure he is hiding something, but I'm not convinced he is the killer. Also, I still think he might be a squib. I seriously doubt that a squib can become a healer.
As for why I am giving facts about the Black family only, it's because my mind is blanking on any other random facts I may, may not, or should know, that are rather unknown.
So My Very Random Facts of the Review:
Fact Number One: I can't stand the actor that played Lupin, he completely ruined Lupin's character for me.
Fact Number Two: George marries Fred's girlfriend.
Author's Response: You don’t like David Thewlis? I’m surprised; I think he’s a great actor. I must confess that I don’t actually think that any of the actors in the films looks (or acts in most cases) like I imagine the book characters would be. Luna/Evanna Lynch is about the closest, Ginny/Bonnie Wright about the furthest (not that I’m a Bonnie hater or anything, I just don’t see her as Ginny). Daniel Radcliffe is really only a convincing Harry in his early years, as he grows (he did get a little taller, if only a bit) he becomes less and less like book Harry in my mind. As for your Black family obsession, I’m still convinced you fancy Sirius. Go on, admit it!
Reviewer: Marinka Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 04:18PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Ha-ha! That was hilarious payback:)) Susan is not very rational, is she? Perhaps some counseling for her would be good thing. I can see her few years from now being totally destroyed as a person if things don't change.
Author's Response: Aw, it’s nice to see poor Susan getting some sympathy from someone! She’s had a hard time of it, the poor lass. Obviously I can’t say too much about what happens to her but she’s definitely got some hard times ahead of her.
Reviewer: jojo99 Signed
Date: 2013.06.18 - 04:11PM
Title: Chapter 8 – The Hands of a Healer
Love the flirting between Harry and Ginny. I'm hoping the killer makes a bit of a blunder shortl to help the Aurors out a little.
Author's Response: I’m afraid our killer is rather a methodical and careful man. He’s planned this too well to make too many blunders. I guess something else will have to happen for the Aurors to catch up with him.
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