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Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2013.11.13 - 04:38PM Title: A Father's Protection
Except for the fact that Harry would kill himself in self-loathing, Ginny's make a great werewolf if Harry'd been able to turn her.
Author's Response: well, that was unexpected. You're right thought. Harry would drown himself in despair and loathing if he'd hurt her.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2013.11.02 - 02:56AM Title: A Father's Protection
oooh Lucius is gonna be pissed his plan failed lol
ILG
Author's Response: Yes. Yes he is
Reviewer: IamGinnyWeasley Signed Date: 2013.11.01 - 09:59AM Title: A Father's Protection
It's really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! I think that it's probably Greyback as he tracked down Harry before. Update soon please!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to have the next chapter up within the coming week. I love to see all the guesses as to who cast the spell. It's so much fun! *laughs evilly*
Reviewer: Noellexcz Signed Date: 2013.10.29 - 02:29PM Title: A Father's Protection
AHH NOOO! I was so worried. But yay for Neville as a new friend for Harry! Can we just have Harry and Ginny as a couple now. It would make my well month to be perfectly honest...
Who cast the damned charm? Pettigrew? Snape? Malfoy? I MUST KNOW!!!
Update soon :)
Author's Response: Yes, Neville will be a new friend and so will be more involved with the story. As for H/G, they will, just have some patience.. Some good guesses regarding the perpetrator. That will be revealed soon too.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2013.10.24 - 10:04AM Title: A Father's Protection
that was a close call! Good on Ginny for sticking by him though :)
Author's Response: it WAS a close call, wasn't it? Ginny is very determined to be by Harry's side until the very end, which is good.
Reviewer: Senator of Sorcery Signed Date: 2013.10.23 - 04:41PM Title: A Father's Protection
This is wonderful! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thank you! can't say exactly when the next chapter will be up but I hope it's relatively soon.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.10.22 - 01:01AM Title: A Father's Protection
Great chapter.
The thought that someone in the castle has forced the transformation onto Harry is scary. It was just lucky that Ginny and Hermione were close to help him. I hope Neville finds out soon and accepts it like the other two.
Harry's conversation with Remus was amusing. It will hit him like a ten tonne brick, soon.
If it wasn't Draco that cast that spell, Lucius is the only choice. But he would have to sneak into the castle first, without Dumbledore knowing it.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, it is a scary thought, isn't it? The answer regarding Neville will be in the next chapter. I loved writing that conversation between Harry and Remus. I'm glad you enjoyed it, too. It'll be a couple chapters before he realizes what it means. Interesting thought on who cast that spell. Are you sure those are the only two options?
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.10.21 - 09:50PM Title: A Father's Protection
So glad that Neville has joined their group. I'm not surprised that Ron is still giving him trouble. I love the way they all banded together and helped Harry. I suspect that Lucius is the one who cast the spell. He and Greyback are a dangerous pair. I wonder if Neville will figure it out. Nice to see Ginny staying with him through it all.
Author's Response: You only have to wait until next chapter to get an answer regarding Neville. Ron will continue to be a git for a little longer but he'll come around. Interesting guess on who cast the spell. Ginny is determined to stay by Harry's side, which is good because that's exactly what Harry needs.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2013.10.20 - 08:25AM Title: A Father's Protection
Harry and Ginny are both on there way to leaving the school as Draco for sure did it....kutgw
Author's Response: Wonder what Dumbledore would do then? Thanks for the review. I love hearing everyone's reactions to each chapter, good or bad, as long as the bad is done constructively.
Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2013.10.19 - 05:28PM Title: A Father's Protection
I have very much enjoyed this story. Keep it up! Just one small constructive criticism. To reflect a well written story it is important to keep a consistent point of view and not keep shifting from whose point of view we are reading from. Several times in this chapter the point of view shifting from Harry to Ginny and back again, just a paragraph or two each. Other than that, I really enjoyed this chapter (and story). The possibility of having werewolves being forced to changed from human to werewolf form is just horrifying. I shudder to think of what Fenrir Greyback would do if he could BE a werewolf all of the time.
Author's Response: Thank you for that bit of constructive criticism. That's something I definitely need to work on. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter despite those flaws. Yeah, that thought about Greyback isn't a good one.
