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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.04.28 - 05:41AM Title: Unity

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I am very pleased that Harry finally has close friends, even mutual friends with Ginny. I’m pretty sure that their friends will be important for their future. It was a very nice gesture by Bill to write the letter to Harry.

Btw, have I missed something? Why will Ginny replace Harry in the next Quidditch game? Not that I’m complain, I’m delighted for her, but it was all of a sudden.



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2014.05.22 - 05:00PM Title: Unity

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Yay for Bill!

Author's Response: Yes, Bill is an awesome guy. I really wish we got to see more of him and Charlie in canon.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.03.11 - 10:24AM Title: Unity

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Great chapter.
I'm glad you are writing both Bill and Charlie in your story. They were both so underdeveloped in canon. I feel, there was so much more J K Rowling could ave done with their characters.
Looking forward to more as that last bit was a bit too......evil or sinister.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I agree about Bill and Charlie. I would have loved to have learned more about them. As for that last line, fun and games are NOT ahead.



Reviewer: IamGinnyWeasley Signed Date: 2014.03.06 - 05:17PM Title: Unity

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Yet another brilliant addition to the story! Please update soon. I really like the relationship between Bill and Harry but the last sentence sound quite ominous.


Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! I'm hoping that I can update again soon but not sure how soon it will be. The chapter I'm currently writing isn't flowing too well right now. That last sentence is definitely an obvious foreshadowing.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.03.04 - 04:58PM Title: Unity

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I do not like that last sentence.

Author's Response: You're not supposed to.



Reviewer: OriCucchi Signed Date: 2014.03.04 - 09:19AM Title: Unity

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I don't know how you do it, but it seems like your chapters just keep on getting better and better!

Author's Response: Awww. Thank you so much!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.03.03 - 12:12PM Title: Unity

Harry really needed to get that from bill as well as allow some freedom to move on in his relationship with Ginny......kutgw

Author's Response: Yes, exactly!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.03.03 - 11:19AM Title: Unity

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That was a rather enjoyable chapter. I liked the letter from Bill and I always love when Sirius makes an appearance. That ending was rather ominous, though, so you haver me wondering what's going to happend next!

Author's Response: It's always nice to hear someone say they enjoyed the chapter. Thank you. The letter from Bill was probably my favorite bit to write of that chapter. The ending was meant to be ominous. The opening quote was a major hint of what's to come.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.03.03 - 11:08AM Title: Unity

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What a lovely chapter!
I really like how they're including Neville and he's being treated as a real friend and equal and in turn he's able to stand up for himself and what he believes. I also liked Ron and Harry playing chess and Bill's letter to Harry. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm doing my best to include Neville as I see him as being more than a bit player. Ron is finally beginning to grow up. That's not to say he won't still have his moments but they'll be fewer and further between. Bill's letter was one of my favorite parts of the chapter. We never saw much of him in canon and I wanted to give a little more insight into him as a character.




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