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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.04.28 - 07:03AM Title: The Price

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Oops, that was really a nasty surprise. I hope that Harry is able to recover from it. Sure, Sirius is able to support Harry in the future. However, I fear that he is a bit imprudent sometimes.

I wonder for what purpose you have taken Remus out of the story. What do you intend to change in Harrys life? Dumbledore has something rubbed off to you, hasn't he, lol?

So, lets read and see what price Hary has to pay ...



Author's Response: Harry's paid his price with the loss of Remus. I hope you like how I write Sirius towards the end. He's not as impetuous as he's often depicted (not that he doesn't like to have fun)



Reviewer: Andeloth Signed Date: 2014.06.28 - 12:36PM Title: The Price

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When are you going to update? I'm dying of anticipation here :(.



Reviewer: Noellexcz Signed Date: 2014.06.11 - 06:48AM Title: The Price

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Ahhhhhhhh!!! Wtf?! Nooo, nope I refuse to believe this!!! He can't be gone... nope!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.06.10 - 09:00PM Title: The Price

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Well...That is a really dramatic chapter.
Poor Harry. He has lost his parents and now his 'father' figure. Glad he has Sirius and, especially, Ginny. He is going to need their support.
I don't think Malfoy was the hunter...but I would bet you, he had something to do with it.

Loved the prank. I could just imagine the Slytherin table occupants all changing into puffskeins. But the look on Snape's face...comical, to say the least. (Still chuckling over the thought in my head).

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Reviewer: Senator of Sorcery Signed Date: 2014.05.27 - 05:00PM Title: The Price

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Author's Response: Thanks for the rating.



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2014.05.27 - 02:54PM Title: The Price

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You gave fair warning, so shall I, INCOMING!!. :)

Did you really need to kill him now?! I hope it was for more than lets screw with the reader.

Thanks for sharing.


Author's Response: Of course there was a reason for Remus' death. I don't write these kinds of things just because. They have a reason.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.05.27 - 01:39PM Title: The Price

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Wow! I really wasn't expecting that. I think I may be in shock. Poor Harry, as if his life isn't messed up enough he loses Remus now? I'd hope they killed that "hunter" if I didn't suspect it would just make more problems for Harry and Sirius.

Author's Response: No stones? Good. The good thing is Sirius will remain a part of Harry's life. As for the hunter, it IS rather vague about what happened to him, isn't it?



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.05.27 - 10:49AM Title: The Price

No stones thrown from me, but I think I'm still in shock!
Poor Remus, it's really going to change things for Harry now...



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.05.27 - 10:49AM Title: The Price

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No stones thrown from me, but I think I'm still in shock!
Poor Remus, it's really going to change things for Harry now...

Author's Response: Good! Yeah, things are changing and Harry will begin to take a more proactive approach to things now..



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.05.27 - 05:57AM Title: The Price

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Dramatic.

Author's Response: Yes, it was and it wasn't easy to write.



Reviewer: matthunt101 Signed Date: 2014.05.26 - 10:12PM Title: The Price

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Just have to say Wow! I didn't see this coming. I love this story, and I can't wait till the next chapter for a little more explanation of what just happened.
Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. Kids are out of school so no guarantees when the next one is uploaded.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.05.26 - 04:36PM Title: The Price

Oh great not they really pissed Harry off and now they are going to pay the price for it soon I hope...malfoy better pray it's quick....kutgw

Author's Response: Who says Malfoy's the one behind Remus's death? Anyway, thanks for sticking around after that chapter.



Reviewer: OriCucchi Signed Date: 2014.05.26 - 03:13PM Title: The Price

What?!?!? No!!! Remus can't be dead! You can't just kill him just like that. What about Harry? Or what about Tonks and Teddy? Please tell me you're not really killing him off, tell me it was just a really horrible dream... Please?

Author's Response: Sorry, can't tell you that. Sirius is staying around, though, if it's any consolation.




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