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Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2015.09.09 - 06:09AM Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium

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Not bad, though I have a few nitpicks:

First, it's "In Memoriam" with an 'a'. And I'm pretty sure that professor Vector was a woman.

The third nitpick is in the way you rushed to end your story. This last chapter doesn't quite live up to the 36 before it. Personally, I attribute that to your revelation about Ginny being put off for a whole six months and then kind of... glossed over, for lack of a better term. Maybe that's just me, but I can't take to this last chapter.

Anyway, the rest of your story is great, so keep it up.

Best regards,
Ranma-sensei



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.07 - 04:37PM Title: Chapter 31: Eyes in the Back of His Head

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Great chapter



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.07 - 02:57PM Title: Chapter 23: Help

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This truly is an action packed story with a lot of characters and a complex plot. Looking forward to seeing what will happen next.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.07 - 11:07AM Title: Chapter 19: Rising Storm

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Wow, long journey. I am glad that Harry is finally back.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.06 - 08:56PM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

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The dreams are really frightening and disturbing. I am surprised by how complicated this entire process is. Most of the magic in the world of Harry Potter is rather quick.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.06 - 07:58PM Title: Chapter 4: A Prophecy

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Love the way Ginny reacts to Dumbledore. Good story so far.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.06 - 01:45PM Title: Chapter 2: The After World

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Oh the Malfoy family. Is this post Goblet of Fire? I am trying to decipher how old they all are.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.06 - 01:42PM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack

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Interesting twist having Tom and Voldemort both attacking the village of Hogsmead. I am curious to read the next chapter.



Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:50AM Title: Chapter 11: 'I'll Watch Your Life In Pictures'

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:50AM Title: Chapter 9: The Graveyard Again

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:49AM Title: Chapter 8: Nightmares and Fears

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:49AM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:49AM Title: Chapter 6: Souls and Secrets

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:48AM Title: Chapter 5: Fidelis Anima

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:48AM Title: Chapter 4: A Prophecy

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:47AM Title: Chapter 3: The Potion

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:47AM Title: Chapter 2: The After World

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:46AM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack

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Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:43AM Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium

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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.07.12 - 10:12PM Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium

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A very full-on and interesting story. Thankyou.




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