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Reviewer: CharLee Signed
Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:47AM
Title: Chapter 3: The Potion
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Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed
Date: 2014.01.19 - 04:34AM
Title: Chapter 3: The Potion
This story has an interesting premise. My only problem so far is that there is a lot of repetition with Ginny having to tell everyone what happened individually. Also, you have confused vial and vile. Other than that, I'm liking it.
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed
Date: 2013.09.30 - 02:18PM
Title: Chapter 3: The Potion
Yeay for Hermione!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2013.09.15 - 06:24AM
Title: Chapter 3: The Potion
Very interesting chapter.
I don't know if you have a beta but there is a few small typos throughout your story. But, they don't take from your story.
Congratulations on your award. I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I haven't got a beta, so the typo's are entirely my fault. I'll find them and fix them. Thanks for telling me!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2013.09.14 - 10:26PM
Title: Chapter 3: The Potion
You received the People's Choice Award because yours was the better of the two stories. The readership at SIYE recognized that and wanted you to know that your efforts deserved the recognition.
Even though there's still some animosity between Draco and Ginny, it's nice to see that they've called a truce in the hostilities long enough to help Lucius with the potion. Also, doesn't it say in the Epilogue to DH that Harry and Draco acknowledged each other on Platform nine and three-quarters? I can see this cooperation between Ginny and Draco as being the beginning of the end of this particular group of Gryffindors and Slytherins aggression against each other if Lucius is successful in finding Harry's soul match.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Well done.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2013.09.11 - 05:28PM
Title: Chapter 3: The Potion
Is anyone taking bets on whose soul is anchoring Harry to the in between? Put me down for a fiver on Ginny.
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