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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.06 - 08:56PM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

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The dreams are really frightening and disturbing. I am surprised by how complicated this entire process is. Most of the magic in the world of Harry Potter is rather quick.



Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:49AM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

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Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2013.11.06 - 02:08PM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

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Congrats for doing NaNoWriMo--it's rather a rush, isn't it?

I'm looking forward to the explanation of why Ginny had to make it through seven nightmares in order to rescue Harry.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.11.04 - 08:29PM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

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These nightmares are vivid. It would be quite scary to be in another's nightmare and have to face the evil; not knowing what it was.
This chapter is well written and is full of description.
Looking forward to the next chapter.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.11.04 - 02:53PM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

Does not sound like anything I'd like to go through. Very disturbing.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2013.11.04 - 11:01AM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

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Wow! This was a very intense chapter. I wonder who's dreams these first two were? I'll be looking forward to your next update to see what comes next.



Reviewer: Grownupron1 Signed Date: 2013.11.04 - 09:28AM Title: Chapter 7: A Deadly Dance

I'm trying to give the author the benefit of the doubt but Draco, and everyones interactions with him, is so OOC its jarring and make it nearly impossible to read.




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