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Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2014.01.20 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 14: Test Three
"If you break a window, well, let's just say something bad happens.” Shouldn't that be "mirror"?
I think perhaps I'm losing touch with the whole goal, here. Never ending cycle of testing, with no real progress being seen. Yay for Ginny resisting temptation, but it doesn't seem to be making any difference.
Reviewer: sherlockholmes Signed Date: 2014.01.19 - 07:20AM Title: Chapter 14: Test Three
Its a really nice story.
Can i ask you a question? have you read Divergent? because the tasks Ginny has to go through are quite similar to the book's character, Tris. anyway, thats also an awesome book.
as for your story, its a really beautiful plot. and i hope you update soon
Author's Response: Yeah, I've read Divergent. That's where I got the idea for some of the tests. Don't worry, After won't end like the Divergent series did! Thanks for your support and feedback!
Reviewer: Brennus Signed Date: 2014.01.19 - 06:28AM Title: Chapter 14: Test Three
I must confess that I rather ignored this story when it was first posted, mainly as I didn't like the idea of challenge which sounded like the start of a Ginny/Draco story to me. While I still have some doubts about the basic premise (I seriously doubt any of the Malfoys have the rocks to defy Voldemort) I do appreciate the way this story has built and must say I'm thoroughly enjoying it. I do love a strongGinny! story and this is great. I see your stories have mainly been one shots or just a couple of chapters previously (at least on this site) and I would encourage you to work on other multi-chapter tales in the future as this is excellent. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.01.19 - 01:59AM Title: Chapter 14: Test Three
All these tests are a real show of Ginny's character. If she wants something, she goes, wholly, after it. She has determination.
Great chapter and looking forward to the next one.
