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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.12.27 - 02:14PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Great beginning to this story. I love the idea that Ginny is permanently altered by her experiences with Tom's diary.

Author's Response: Quite a few people were nervous about the beginning, and a number on FF.net didn't read beyond the first chapter as they felt Ginny was excessively manipulative. Still, if they can't be bothered to read further than one chapter they're no loss to me.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.02.13 - 06:29AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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I really like the idea of a Ginny POV story, there are far too rare. The summery promises an exciting story.
On the other hand, I hope that a manipulative Ginny doesn't become to Slytherin-like. Although I read Ginny/Harry being Slytherin stories, they're usually at the bottom of the pile of books I plan to read.
Regarding the Ron bashing, I have no problem as long as it is comprehensible.

My most important rule is: As long Ginny is happy, I am too.

Author's Response: I admit I loved writing this from Ginny's POV and I might do something similar in the future. Quite why I enjoyed pretending I was a teenage girl is open to speculation...



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.20 - 05:19PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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I am crazy with Ron bashing story's, but I have no issue with reading if it done right. Ron is not my favorite character but I rather he get bashed for it plot of the story, not because the author hate Ron and want to make him pay. Also I don't like to read that Ron is made into a greater enemy then Voldemort

Author's Response: I do know what you mean. I've read loads of 'betrayed Harry' stories where all sorts of implausible scenarios where he ends up becoming a Death Eater or killing Hermione, or something. I've never made a secret that I really don't like the character, but hopefully by the end of Thorny Rose 3 (if you get that far) Ron's behaviour will make sense. Or as much sense as I ever make, anyway.



Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2014.01.12 - 10:41PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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I was surprised by Harry's statement regarding Percy ratting him out. Percy doesn't turn against Harry until the fifth book, so I would think at this point Harry wouldn't have such strong feelings of animosity towards Percy. I was also surprised at how upset Harry was over Ginny knowing about his invisibility cloak. That wasn't something that he kept secret, I didn't think. Seems like most people, even the twins knew about it by the third year.

I'm uncertain about how manipulative Ginny appears to be and she seems to want Harry for status he could bring her more than the fact that's he loves him. I hope I am wrong about that and you did warn us that she would be manipulative. I just am not so sure about the internal monologue she had regarding her reasons for wanting to be with Harry. Despite those misgivings, I am looking forward to reading more so I can eventually get around to reading the new installment you are posting.



Author's Response: Harry wasn't so much upset about Ginny knowing about his invisibility cloak, he was just about to show it to her after all, rather that his surprise was spoilt and that Ron had been so lose lipped. While Percy isn't in full scale back-stabbing mode, he is a stickler for rules and Harry's point was that perfect Percy would dob in anyone, even his own mum.



Reviewer: ame9515 Signed Date: 2013.12.31 - 11:37PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2013.12.18 - 03:48PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Whoa, you weren't kidding when you said Ginny would be a bit manipulative. Fact is you've moved her to Slytherin House. Which might not be a bad analogy actually. If Ginny has received Tom's memories, I think it would be reasonable to argue that she could be influenced by his personality as well. To some degree she is already realizing this. I will be interested to see if she realizes over time that manipulation is ultimately destructive to a relationship?

Author's Response: Although she has all those memories at her disposal, she is still a very young girl and doesn't have the experience to use them effectively. She will change as the story progresses, I promise.



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2013.10.16 - 08:50PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Fun chapter...and good start to a story with a lot of promise!

thanks

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the rest of it.



Reviewer: ababcd Signed Date: 2013.09.22 - 03:07PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Interesting start.

Author's Response: Hope you find the rest equally intriguing.



Reviewer: Hippothestrowl Signed Date: 2013.09.11 - 07:14PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Nicely written and it makes a change to read a Ginny-driven fic. I think it's a slightly one-sided view of her though. I mean, she does have this sharp, devious edge but it would be nice to see other, more pleasant facets of her character; she feels more like a Slytherin at the moment. Plus a few weaknesses and failures and vulnerabiilties would be good. Still, she's nothing if not determined.

The idea of her inheriting knowledge from the diary soul is a good one and adds a new dynamic.

I've come to the conclusion in my own stories that rewrites are not likely to have the powerful interest of new material; I almost vowed to myself, never again! So, it remains to be seen how this one works out and if it can hold me and compete with the piles of stories I've got log-jammed to read! :)

Author's Response: You want to see more of Ginny's vulnerabilities? That actually may just happen in a few chapters time. While this story follows GoF fairly closely, I have thrown one major non-canon event into the mix which will have a major impact on Miss Weasley and cause her to question herself. I know what you mean about rewrites. I was initially reluctant to try my hand at one, but once I did I would I really enjoyed writing it. hopefully I've thrown enough new elements into the mix to keep peoples attention, while keeping the basic plot line similar.



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2013.09.07 - 05:09AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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I'm hooked! Love Slytherin Ginny.

Author's Response: I admit to being a sucker for stories that feature Harry or Ginny being placed into Slytherin. Obviously this is a little different to that, but Ginny certainly is closer to being a cunning Slytherin than a rash Gryffindor here.



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2013.09.02 - 11:50AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Slightly manipulative? More like an awful lot! Makes for a great read so far though :D

Author's Response: Yes, but in a good way! Things become a bit more balanced as the story progresses



Reviewer: Marauder3721 Signed Date: 2013.09.01 - 11:31AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Reviewer: Manwe Valarian Signed Date: 2013.08.31 - 03:02AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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An interesting concept for a story. Ginny's character reminds me of an observation by a comedian. When a man sees the woman he wanted to marry he wants his wife to remain that girl, when a woman sees a man, she thinks to herself. ' I can work with that to get what I want.'
The other aspect of this story I thought of mentioning is the knowledge that Ginny has from Tom. I realize this is totally theoretical and only a Potterphile would discuss this, but: I have a difficult time believing that Tom would have done anything but take from Ginny. He never let anyone into his thoughts and plans. she also blacked out when he possessed her, so she wouldn't gain conscious thoughts from those encounters.

Author's Response: I never thought for a second that Tom would have given these memories to Ginny voluntarily. I envisaged that this was a result of Riddle being destroyed while he and Ginny were 'linked' as it where. I don't see whey she would needed to be conscious to receive them, either; the sub-conscious is a wonderful thing. I do like your observation about the differences between how men and women view potential partners; not only very funny but completely true!



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2013.08.30 - 01:48AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!



Reviewer: HG Forever9696 Signed Date: 2013.08.30 - 12:59AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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well well well another great story from you although I don't think that I like the idea of a manipulating Ginny much but you cannot judge a story by just an idea so I'll be waiting for your update. oh and by the way a great start

Author's Response: Rest assured this first chapter is as truly manipulative as Ginny gets. She'll soon get sucked up into the chaos and confusion that is Harry's life. She's not quite a Slytherin yet.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.08.29 - 02:41PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Again love the story and your take on Ginny. The way she handled his crush on Cho is amazing and very well done. I'm still quite curious about Hermione her crappy attitude.

Author's Response: All will be explained regarding Miss Granger. Lets just say she does have a logical reason for acting the way she does and it will become clear in chapter 3. At least having Ginny steer Harry away from Cho will save on his dry cleaning bill. The girl was a complete hosepipe.



Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2013.08.29 - 01:32PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Reviewer: BraverLeonheart Signed Date: 2013.08.29 - 12:41PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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I know I've got another chapter to read yet but I had to say I'm really glad to see you are back. I have been looking forward to your return and wondering what you were going to go for. This was a pleasant surprise. I really enjoy slightly AU stories

I thought you'd like this pointing out.

“Damn it!” Harry snarled quietly. “This was supposed to be kept quite!

I'm sure I don't need to point out it should be quiet. But it's very rare I find any mistakes in your work so congratulations for making one

~Tim

Author's Response: It's alright; seekers destiny appears to be doing well at finding my mistakes! I must admit this wasn't the story I thought I would be posting next. I had another story I spent ages mapping and was quite excited about. Sadly, I made the mistake of trying to write it in the first person and it just didn't work. Also, when I stepped back from it I realised the plot was over complicated and a bit dull. Still, I had fun writing this one and that's what matters the most. Hope you enjoy it.



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2013.08.29 - 12:38PM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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Your stories aren't always my cup of tea but this one is showing promise. I'm not put off by Ron bashing, in GOF he deserved it. I just don't like gratuitous bashing. Speaking of bashing, the errata at the end does not represent author bashing, it's my attempt to help. Even when I'm not looking for them some errors just seem to jump out at me so that's what I found.

Overall, I like this chapter but a manipulative Ginny is slightly disturbing. Harry has enough of that in his life with Dumbledore. However, unlike Dumbledore I think Ginny truly has his best interest at heart even if it partially comes from her own self interest.

errata:
Has Brennus gone soft, I here you cry?
I think you "hear" better than you "here". ;-)

which had been tense and ridged
which had been tense and rigid

This was supposed to be kept quite!
This was supposed to be kept quiet!

Hermione was sat next
Hermione was sitting next
I wasn't sure I should bring this one up again...

a glare from Ginny at least kept him quite
a glare from Ginny at least kept him quiet

I would have thought by now that you would have realised by now
One "by now" is sufficient, I think.

Ginny could see the intense curiously
Ginny could see the intense curiosity

It took several tried for Harry
It took several tries for Harry

Author's Response: Sigh, just when I think my grammar is getting better. Thank you for pointing out the errors, I will correct them immediately. To be honest, I was worried about Ginny coming over as too manipulative but general consensus appears to be that as she's working in Harry's best interests it's all good. I will say, this first chapter is her at her most manipulative and she'll quickly ease into a good friendship with Harry. Not everything will go her way, either, and certain things will backfire on her.



Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2013.08.29 - 09:46AM Title: Chapter 1 – Ginny’s Helping Hand

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I'm going to start with I hate Ron bashing fics, not because I like Ron, which I don't, but mainly because I find it childish. That said I believe I liked every single fic of your I've read so I will give it a shot. In fact this book was the book that Harry forgiving Ron was the most crazy thing I've seen.

"Ginny assured him, ignoring the Muggle reference which she didn’t understand." Why wouldn't she know, if she had Riddle's memories? Well, she wouldn't known who Muhammed is, but the boxing reference makes it pretty simple. Also it is Muhammed Ali, not Mohamed.

“Damn it!” Harry snarled quietly. “This was supposed to be kept quite! That should be quiet, not quite.

Sorry if it seems like I'm nitpicking :'(

So far a fairly cliche starting and divergence point. However there is a good reason for both, they can be quite interesting. There is a fine line between manipulative and bitch but I trust to walk it.

Author's Response: Damn, I saw that quite/quiet one and forgot to change it. How I messed up Ali's name I have no idea: I looked it up! If you've read my previous stuff you know that I'm no fan of Ron's character, but this is the first time I’ve ever really laid into him. In the case of this story and Harry's split with Ron, I was obviously taking a canon event and widening it by Ginny's intervention. I agree that Harry was far too forgiving in GoF but put that down to his strong desire for friendship that had been lacking for all his life. By having Ginny step in to the role of best friend, Harry doesn't have to face the prospect of loneliness and so will be far less forgiving here. Of course, that's going to piss Ron off and the rift will widen even further to the point where... well, you'll have to wait and see. Hopefully Ginny won't come over as too manipulative either; not everything is going to go her way and she's going to make some discoveries about herself, too.




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