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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.11.07 - 11:19PM Title: Summer at Hogwarts
Great couple of chapters.
Cho's actions, in Quality Quidditch Supplies, doesn't surprise me. To me, she always seemed to flirt at any male she was near to.
Looking forward to when the next chapter is validated.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2013.11.07 - 01:29PM Title: Summer at Hogwarts
I like this story and it could be quite original. But please do not re-hash the original story on a new time line. Try to keep him as an American, and do things differently.
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.11.07 - 10:51AM Title: Summer at Hogwarts
Beautiful scene with Brook flying with Hedwig. He did a great job of resisting Cho's advances. I've just realised there may be a serious problem with Ginny. If she's been having dreams of him, he doesn't look right at present. Potentially serious issue here. Fun chapter. Loved the letter.
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2013.11.06 - 03:02PM Title: Summer at Hogwarts
Nice that he didn't feel anything for Cho--quite forward of her, yeah?
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2013.11.06 - 02:00PM Title: Summer at Hogwarts
So, Brook has seen his dream girl already! I I can't wait until he actually meets her when school starts. I wonder if she will recognize him, too? His introduction to flying was lots of fun, too. I loved the idea of he and Hedwig flying around together. Thanks for posting these two chapters so quickly, I'll be looking forward to your next update!
