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Reviewer: Finnspa23 Signed Date: 2024.03.10 - 12:34AM Title: The Vision Fulfilled

You already killed Avery off I believe. Voldy hit him with an entrails expelling curse and Harry had a vision of Avery's heart stopping while it was outside of his chest... food for thought!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.02.20 - 09:27AM Title: The Vision Fulfilled

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That was a great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.02.15 - 09:19AM Title: The Vision Fulfilled

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what a chapter! can't wait for the next :)
can't say I'm sorry about Dumbledore though, as I'm not exactly a fan of his



Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2014.02.14 - 01:54PM Title: The Vision Fulfilled

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Now that we're near the end please don't leave us hanging long!

That looked like simply this world's version of the corresponding canon scene, where Voldemort's spell would kill the Horcrux and Harry would return, but the idea that he "had a plan" combined with leaning back away from the spell (apparently to dodge it) has me thinking more is going on. If he didn't actually take the curse, is the Harrycrux still alive, or did the Soul Bond somehow already kill it? I forget if it was part of the Soul Bond in your story or if I'm getting confused with other stories, but if Harry thought he was really going to die, wouldn't that mean that Ginny would quickly follow. If so, why did he talk so much about Ron and Hermione being there for her. More hints at Harry's plan...(maybe he just figured out that he was a horcrux?)

I haven't commented much, but I've loved this story from the beginning. It's impressive how you've believably structured this story so as to fit the plots of each book of the series into a single year. I can't wait for the ending!

Author's Response: Thank you for encouragement. You did a good job at detecting my clues that this is not the end. As to the horcrux issue, I have decided to break with canon on that. The story is so long already and I didn't want to write just another horcrux hunt story. You will see how I deal with Voldemort's survival from the rebounded Killing Curse in the next few chapters.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.02.14 - 01:02PM Title: The Vision Fulfilled

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Ah! After all that you leave us with an evil cliffie! A very exciting chapter between the attack in the castle and the confrontation in the forest. Please update soon as I can't wait to see how you handle the result of Riddle's spell.




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