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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.02.24 - 08:48PM Title: Reminiscing

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Really enjoyed this chapter. Now, if the validation would happen!!!



Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2014.02.23 - 07:28AM Title: Reminiscing

Just finally caught up. Fell behind at chapter 34.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.02.22 - 10:05AM Title: Reminiscing

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sad chapter, looking forward to the next :)



Reviewer: XoXmeggzieXoX Signed Date: 2014.02.22 - 05:05AM Title: Reminiscing

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Absolutely loving this story!!
I can't help but wonder why Ginny (or any of the others) have shown any concern about the information Hermione found concerning their death. Particularly after the vision? I would've thought that would've been something they discussed. Ginny seems to be so convinced about Harry's death but no one (namely Ron or Hermione) have brought up the fact that she isn't weakening herself? It may have just been something the characters overlooked, of course, but she thinks about the whole 'no sex' thing in this chapter and one would think you wouldn't forget about your own possible death once it's pretty much been told to happen.
Interested to see if that comes up at all! And so intrigued as to how Harry comes back! After being buried and everything! Can't wait for the next update!



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.02.22 - 02:46AM Title: Reminiscing

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I love your stuff, I do, but I really wish you could get it out faster.. Great chapter.
Tricia



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.02.21 - 01:46PM Title: Reminiscing

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I admit to being at least a little disappointed in this chapter, even if the diary flashbacks were rather sweet. I was really hoping to see how your story handled the follow up to Harry being "killed" by Voldemort. There were a few bits of vital info, of course. Eveidently he was hit by the Killing Curse, despite the hint that he might have avoided it in the last chapter. Of course, now we have to see how you handle this "delayed" resurection (at least as compared to the books). And if Harry is to all appearances "dead and burried" what happened to Voldemort? I really hope we find out soon!



Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed Date: 2014.02.21 - 01:16PM Title: Reminiscing

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Even if this put the plot on hold, I thought this was a fantastic chapter. I liked getting a chance to see Ginny go back and remember her thoughts about Harry through her diary. I almost wish there wasn't the time skip in diary entries and this chapter was a bit longer.

It will be interesting to see how Harry is resurrected. He awoke only minutes after his death in the books, but now he's stuck in a coffin and it's been at least 2 days. He'll need to do a Kill Bill to break himself out when he awakes. Maybe his conversation at "King's Cross" is a little longer in this story.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. There was a little concern that slowing the plot down might turn people off, so I am glad that you liked the diary entries.




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