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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2015.12.28 - 08:45AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Awesome first chapter. I really enjoyed the interaction between Sirius and Molly. Poor Harry learning about Horcruxes in general and that he is one specifically. Ginny is wonderfully pragmatic in this story.
Author's Response: I'm really pleased with the way Sirius came out in this story. I wanted to strike a balance between the fun-loving Marauder, and a man determined to look after his godson well. Hopefully, I got the balance right.
Reviewer: xiaozhengm Signed
Date: 2015.10.22 - 03:38AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
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Author's Response: Eh? Is this urban slang or did you fall asleep on your keyboard?
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed
Date: 2014.11.12 - 11:04PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Oh, how could you? Poor Harry. Just when he feels he is getting his life in order, has an amazing godfather, new duds, new digs, and then you pull the rug completely out from under him. And his gorgeous girlfriend had to deliver the awful news? That being said, great chapter! I loved how Ginnu kept reading his letter over and over again. Also glad you addressed the very un-Harry-like 'My darling Ginny'😄
Author's Response: I forgot what I did to Harry that was so mean in this chapter - I had to go back and look it up! Ah, yes; he's a Horcrux. That's the sort of knowledge that could ruin your entire day. As for the letter, it's just as well he's got Sirius to give him a few pointers, eh?
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed
Date: 2014.06.20 - 06:15PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
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Reviewer: Aragorn Signed
Date: 2014.01.03 - 01:54AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
So happy to see this being posted!
Thank you for the creative gift.
Author's Response: You're very welcome. Sorry I didn't wrap it.
Reviewer: alterdream Signed
Date: 2014.01.02 - 10:25PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Ohhhh I'm so glad you're writing this! It's a great first chapter :) I look forward to more Dumbledore-bashing and Molly-circumventing.
Author's Response: I did say at the start of TR1 I wouldn't bash Dumbledore too hard in this series, but I have to confess he's not looking too good at present. Molly will be alright in this one, in fact I have plans for the indomitable Mrs Weasley in part three of the series.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2014.01.02 - 08:48AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Yippee...Another story by Brennus. Can't wait to read more.
Love your Sirius. He is such a 'smooth talker'.
Just a small comment. Your last line should probably read..... 'Harry stared at her in horror'.
Anyway, brilliant start to your sequel.
Author's Response: Good spot, CJ. That cheeky little 'in' nearly got away from me.
Reviewer: ame9515 Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 11:36PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
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Reviewer: dshadel Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 07:21PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Was just about to re-read the first part of this when I saw the new has started! Good start looking forward to the next one😊
Author's Response: Chapter 2 has just been posted and is awaiting validation. How's that for timing.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 01:07PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Glad you have decided not to go down the angsty route. Be positive.
Author's Response: A have enough angst in my life; I do work for a bank, after all.
Reviewer: hubris Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 12:12PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
In reviews one usually mentions grammar and spelling for the lack there of. I can't tell you what a pleasure it is to read a good plot, well told, without the distractions of poor mechanics. So glad to see the story continued, but would have enjoyed a few thousand additional words to savor.
Author's Response: The praise for the low SPAG count must go to the wonderful Arnel. It's no coincidence that she beta's for so many Trinket award winners, you know. A few thousand extra words? What more do you want: blood? Oh, here comes the writers cramp again...
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 11:59AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Gloriosky!!! The Great Brennus, the Leonardo Da Vinci of literary genius, has returned!! And with a sequel to boot!!! WHOHOOOOO!!! This masterpiece in the making is off to a wonderful start. I think Sirius could have charmed Midas out of his golden touch! Certainly didn't have any trouble with distracting Molly - wonder if he ended up with a stomach ache after all that sampling!?! Ginny clearly has Harry wrapped around her little finger like a piece of thread! That's Potter men and fiery redheads for you! At the end it looked like you could have knocked Harry over with an owl feather!
I like that Harry learns about the horcruxes from Ginny instead of Dumbledork, the cantankerous old fart! Also liked the wardrobe bit too! And for the record, Mrs. Auror has the final say on my clothing choices as well! P.S.: If you ever even think about telling Mrs. Brennus she is wrong about something and you are right, ask yourself this simple question first: Do you want to be right or do you want to be happy? Saluting you with my wand, I eagerly await the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: I'm sure your on a mission to make each review more OTT than the last one :-) although, frankly, the bit about you saluting me with your wand just has me worried. I might be taking the whole clothes thing a bit far, actually. I made Mrs B come with me to buy a belt the other day. I was afraid I'd end up with a pink, sparkly one if I didn't.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 05:51AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Nothing like getting down to business and scarring the crap out of Harry...as for them together at grim place nice move....kutgw and nice to see part 2 up and running for the new year
Author's Response: Poor Harry, just when things are going right for him he finds that out. Never fear, Ginny has a cunning plan...
Reviewer: BraverLeonheart Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 05:22AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Excellent start to a sequel. Cutting out much of the crap rehashing everything that happened last time, save a few paragraphs, and getting on with it. Love your Sirius, every story should have this Sirius in. His characterisation is spot on
Author's Response: I definitely don't write enough Sirius, but this story features him heavily. And lots of fun I had writing him, too.
Reviewer: Trucker Signed
Date: 2013.12.31 - 12:32AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
One tiny complaint in an otherwise perfect read:
“Why did you warn me you were coming,” she asked...
should probably be
“Why didn't you warn me you were coming,” she asked...
Author's Response: Bugger. One day I'll write a chapter without a cock-up in it, I swear...
Reviewer: Bethina Signed
Date: 2013.12.30 - 06:07PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
New story! Happy Dance!
Author's Response: Dance, Bethina, dance!
Reviewer: parakletos Signed
Date: 2013.12.30 - 04:18PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Nice to see the ground broken on the next part of the story.
Any more Zep references to come and if so, can we have a chapter titled Black Dog? :)
Author's Response: I'm not going so far as to title the chapters after Zep songs (even if Black Dog would have had a Padfoot seal of approval) although I was thinking of calling TR3 'A spring clean for the May Queen'. Anyway, this could have been a tribute to Down's second album: I like a bit of sludgy stoner rock, me.
Reviewer: Kukia Signed
Date: 2013.12.30 - 01:29PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
I loved the first chapter. I'm so glad you are continuing the story.
Author's Response: My muse was calling, and I couldn't say no!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2013.12.30 - 12:35PM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Love this story so far! I really do love the confident, fun, charming Sirius you are portraying - he's fun without reducing him to a pranking joke who needs Remus to care for Harry. You write Molly well - she's still the world's biggest worrywort, but she can be worked with. Can't wait to see what you come up with for the Horcruxes.
Author's Response: My version of Sirius appears to be going down well. I think we all have this vision of him as a playful, fun, caring sort of bloke and hated to see him depressed and frustrated in OotP. Still, his time in Azkaban won't leave him totally unaffected but I won't say too much about that yet. This Molly will definitely be more fun loving and less uptight then I've written her in some of my stories. She might even surprise Ginny a few times, too. Ginny's plan for the Horcruxes will be revealed in the next chapter.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2013.12.30 - 11:59AM
Title: Chapter 1 – A New Day Dawning
Glad to see this sequel! I love your Sirius and the Dumbledore bashing!
looking foward to seeing how things go :)
Author's Response: I really don't write enough of Sirius. 'Butterfly Effect' is the only other story of mine that he even features, been though he's one of those characters (like Luna) that I love writing. Still, he'll feature heavily in this one and I might even give him a girlfriend, the lucky old dog.
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