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Reviewer: intikhabalam12 Signed Date: 2014.03.21 - 06:41PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Really fun chapter...I hope the real action will begin soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The next chapter is (currently) called Death in Belgravia. It should answer your hopes.
-N-



Reviewer: Meiadus Signed Date: 2014.03.18 - 04:28PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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lovely, as usual

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.03.18 - 02:56AM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Great fun chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2014.03.17 - 01:18AM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.03.12 - 06:27PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Well I think Harry will lose that bet! Fun chapter, great Easter celebration :)

Author's Response: I think you’re right. Not so much fun in the next chapter. -N-



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2014.03.11 - 03:15PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Wow! You may be very slow to update but when you do, it is wroth the wait. A brilliant chapter as usual. Very descriptive. I even switched off the tv just to read this. Now, that is saying something. I was watching Law and Order, one of my favourite series.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I've never seen any episode of Law and Order, not even Law and Order UK. Perhaps I'm missing something. I don't know. -N-



Reviewer: Rosina Ferguson Signed Date: 2014.03.11 - 07:06AM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

Another cracking chapter. Loved the scene with Harry and Ginny by the gate putting words in the mouths of the others. It cracked me up and was so true to their characters. Shame the older H and G in your other tales aren't as lighthearted. Perhaps just a sign of maturity or a little world weariness.

As for Angelina's egg... Bloody brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I think that to a great extent, it’s circumstances. I’ve shown Harry and Ginny flirting and joking in several one-shots, and in Epithalamium. In Strangers they have yet to (fully) reveal themselves to Jacqui, and at work Harry is having a particularly grim time.
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Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2014.03.10 - 06:35PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Brilliant, as usual. I love how you make your characters alive. Angelina, Charles, Fleur, all of them have their own voices and not only the main ones. The bet on George's dates is fun and now Ginny will be the one to be closest to the truth.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Ginny had to wait for years to collect her money, but she got it eventually (It was referred to in my first ever one-shot – After Breakfast).
-N-



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.03.10 - 05:50PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Wonderful again, no surprise. I find myself waiting for another attack or something. When?
Love as always, thanks
Tricia

Author's Response: I apologise (once again) for the delay in updates. It’s possible that you’ll see Strangers next, but it may be R&D, or (more likely) a non-Harry/Ginny tale. -N-



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.03.10 - 08:26AM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Nor an action packed chapter, but another good look at the life of Harry and Ginny.

Author's Response: You want action? Will a murder do? Next, a look at the Auror Office, and the Metropolitan Police. -N-



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.03.10 - 07:58AM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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A Mini is precisely the car I've pictured Hermione in: compact and practical in its savings on fuel, the ideal car for someone just starting out. I bet her parents helped her buy it.

Angelina's prank on George was terrific. He probably deserved it, too.

It's good that Harry feels so relaxed and happy when he's at The Burrow. He needs that secure sense of family to make him feel complete, something he never had with the Dursleys. It's good that he's considering keeping in touch with Dudley, though.

One last thought... I hope they catch Goyle soon.

All in all, a nicely pleasant chapter to read.

Author's Response:
Hermione passed her test in her Mum's Nissan Micra, and she borrowed it on many occasions, but the Mini is her first car, it was her choice, and yes, her parents helped her to buy it. She has had her 21st birthday, after all.

He definitely deserved it, especially after his behavior on his birthday, and in Cardiff the following weekend.

The Burrow is certainly "home" for Harry. He (and you) will see more of Dudley before you see Goyle.

The action starts next chapter, with a death in Belgravia, and the answer to a question posed by several readers of my "Muggle Interface Team" stories.

-N-



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 11:51PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Nice ground work with plenty of references for anyone catching up. Love your exquisite detail work on characters and settings.

Author's Response: Thank you. As you've realised, this was more stage setting, I wanted to show any new readers what stage the various canon relationships are at, and what's going on. -N-



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 10:53PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

A fun if somewhat relaxing chapter. It's nice to see everyone Getting on so well.

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Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 10:52PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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A fun if somewhat relaxing chapter. It's nice to see everyone Getting on so well.

Author's Response: Relaxing, yes. The action starts next chapter, But I needed to do some explaining for those folk who haven't read Hunters and Prey. -N-



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 09:27PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

Ah the fun of family and nice to see Angelina make George sweat alitle....kutgw

Author's Response: Fourteen people at The Burrow, and that number is only going to increase over the years. -N-



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 07:51PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 07:10PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 05:48PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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I wonder how Hermione’s relatives will be involved, if any? Will Ron make any blunders? :) I just went and read about George’s birthday, Romilda was something else, no wonder they still remember about it 2 week after!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hermione's Aunt & Uncle will make an appearance later ( think). "April Fool" was originally planned to be part of this story, but it adds little to the overall plot, and it sounded better as a George first-person one shot. -N-



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2014.03.09 - 05:48PM Title: The Burrow (Mostly)

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Heh! That was fun! :-) Very well done (as expected).

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-




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