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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.09.24 - 03:14AM Title: Chapter 5- Ron
I'd love ginny to have heard what harry had to say. What on earth could they have accused her of that was so awful?!
And yes...Draco malfoy! A shocking end to the chapter! I can just imagine their shocked faces lol!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.05.02 - 10:10AM Title: Chapter 5- Ron
Interesting chapter.
The Ginny and Draco scene was very curious. The story behind their meeting and subsequent hugging goodbye will be interesting. I wonder what Ron and Harry accused her of to cause such a riff in their friendship.
Where is Hermione? Did she leave the wizarding world? Or just move somewhere else?
More, please.
Author's Response: Hi, Hermione will only appear in the back story in this story but, yes she moved to the US. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review xx
Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2014.05.01 - 06:11PM Title: Chapter 5- Ron
I'm glad to see Harry and Ginny together. Now I want to know with what they accused her. And I agree Ginny hugging Draco is a very very disturbing scene no matter what.
Author's Response: Ha ha
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.05.01 - 03:40PM Title: Chapter 5- Ron
Does Harry have anyone who is just his friend and could give him useful insights into a very confusing Ginny. Ordinarily you would expect Sirius to be that person for him but showing him as close to Ginny as you have really shows how Harry has no one who is primarily his friend. It seems like he could use someone like that but doesn't have anyone. They might have suggested he get his own home instead of being trapped with Ginny.
And Ginny hugging Draco is a very disturbing scene. I presume there is a story behind it but don't know what. It's surprising that she is so forgiving
Author's Response: I'm totally rewriting my next chapter and hoping to address that issue. I also have a beta on board, so the next chap may be delayed a few days. But all secrets will take time ( and many chaps ) to be revealed! Hope you're still with me at the end. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.05.01 - 03:38PM Title: Chapter 5- Ron
Surprise after surprise! So Draco was part of the resistance? You just killing us with suspense:)
Author's Response: I hope in a good way!
Author's Response: I hope in a good way!
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.05.01 - 10:19AM Title: Chapter 5- Ron
You are really driving me crazy (in a good way) with trying to figure out what's going on! A few small hints shed some light on previous questions, but now this chapter just introduces more. The scene with Harry and Ginny this time does give me hope, although I expect it will take a while to resolve all their issues. I do have to say, I'm somewhat worried about the cliff hanger this time. I *loath* the character of Draco Malfoy and have a very difficult time accepting it any time a writer tries to portray him in any sort of positive way. I guess I'll just have to see what you have planned.
Author's Response: Hi, thanks so much for reviewing. Draco isn't a major player in the story but he's not a baddie, although Ron and Harry will never forget what he's done and fully trust him. Hope you keep reading though, cheers x x
