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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.09.24 - 04:19AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken Oh wow! What an accusation. Never go in all guns blazing without the facts. Stupid hermione!!! If harry had been given enough time to think he might have had a chance to realise the sheer nonsense of it all. So Sam is not Harry's child. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.09.10 - 03:54PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken What I have notice more and more with this ride is the lack of communication.....kutgw Reviewer: intikhabalam12 Signed Date: 2014.07.08 - 08:13AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken I happen to have read your oneshot named "the perils of PM" and I very much liked that story with all the comedy and well writing. So I go to your profile and read your this multi-chap fic. Before I tell you anything, Let me tell you that I admire your writing and appreciate your efforts and want you to be even more better. this story which I think is your first one is not as good as the oneshot I just mentioned. First of all, there is no real plot, this is tenth chapter of the story and yet I don't know what's all the fuss is about. the characters behaviour is mostly non-canonic. for instance, in the last chapter in the last sentense, ginny told harry that sam is her daughter and then nothing. The relationship of the trio is heavily disturbed. I don't understand why you kept sirius alive, because in this story, he is not the wonderful protective god-father as in canon but just a man whose happen to be friends with some teenage excluding his godson. I also don't get Neville/Ginny relationship. there is another story named "The Past Always Catches Up by hopefilled" which have almost the same plot but no confusing point. Your Idea is very good and creative but I think it was not properly organised to become a thrilling plot. Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2014.07.07 - 12:49PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken How can she want Harry to trust her while she doesn't trust him? What was the surgery for? Why she didn't told him about the surgery? They were together at that time. She should have told him. I think she don't have any right to be mad and broke up with him. As for her daughter, If I'm not mistaken her age and timing doesn't match. Is there any possibility to be her adopted daughter? Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.07.07 - 11:18AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 04:37PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken Interesting chapter with questions to answer. I also read the reviews. I am fairly sure there was no baby at this time, but the rust issue is interesting. Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 02:56PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken So did Ron and Hermione break up because of this ? That means that Ginny did not tell Harry before that she was going to have surgery ? Was it rust issue ? Reviewer: decdraft Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 12:30PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken Wow! Wasn't expecting that! Really like this story can't wait for the next update. Somehow I am thinking she didn't lose the baby and it is Harry's.... Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 11:30AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken Hmmm. I look forward to learning I am not sure about Ginny in all of this. The fact that you have already told us that she essentially never spoke to Harry again makes you wonder why he is so forgiving and why he blames himself. | |||||||
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