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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.09.24 - 04:19AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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Oh wow! What an accusation. Never go in all guns blazing without the facts. Stupid hermione!!! If harry had been given enough time to think he might have had a chance to realise the sheer nonsense of it all. So Sam is not Harry's child.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.09.10 - 03:54PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

What I have notice more and more with this ride is the lack of communication.....kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, probably true, but you do tend to keep things to yourself if you think you are protecting somebody. Of course once you do tell, you usually feel as though a weight has been lifted. Thanks for reading xx



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2014.07.24 - 04:15AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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Reviewer: intikhabalam12 Signed Date: 2014.07.08 - 08:13AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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I happen to have read your oneshot named "the perils of PM" and I very much liked that story with all the comedy and well writing. So I go to your profile and read your this multi-chap fic. Before I tell you anything, Let me tell you that I admire your writing and appreciate your efforts and want you to be even more better. this story which I think is your first one is not as good as the oneshot I just mentioned. First of all, there is no real plot, this is tenth chapter of the story and yet I don't know what's all the fuss is about. the characters behaviour is mostly non-canonic. for instance, in the last chapter in the last sentense, ginny told harry that sam is her daughter and then nothing. The relationship of the trio is heavily disturbed. I don't understand why you kept sirius alive, because in this story, he is not the wonderful protective god-father as in canon but just a man whose happen to be friends with some teenage excluding his godson. I also don't get Neville/Ginny relationship. there is another story named "The Past Always Catches Up by hopefilled" which have almost the same plot but no confusing point. Your Idea is very good and creative but I think it was not properly organised to become a thrilling plot.

Anyhow, you have all the talent and brains and I wish you best of luck and hope to see more good stories from you. :)



Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2014.07.07 - 12:49PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

How can she want Harry to trust her while she doesn't trust him? What was the surgery for? Why she didn't told him about the surgery? They were together at that time. She should have told him. I think she don't have any right to be mad and broke up with him. As for her daughter, If I'm not mistaken her age and timing doesn't match. Is there any possibility to be her adopted daughter?

Author's Response: You won't find out the reason for the surgery for awhile yet, I think Ginny was more upset that Harry and Ron believed Hermione without question. Damn those angsty teenage hormones! BTW surgery was not planned which is why she didn't tell Harry



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.07.07 - 11:18AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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That was interesting.
Hermione always tends to come to conclusions before getting all the facts.
This was a rushed operation. She, still, could have been pregnant. The operation could have been for something else.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, hope to post soon



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 04:37PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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Interesting chapter with questions to answer. I also read the reviews. I am fairly sure there was no baby at this time, but the rust issue is interesting.



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 02:56PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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So did Ron and Hermione break up because of this ? That means that Ginny did not tell Harry before that she was going to have surgery ? Was it rust issue ?

Author's Response: No but this was just another nail in the coffin of the R/H relationship. Surgery was not planned.



Reviewer: decdraft Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 12:30PM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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Wow! Wasn't expecting that! Really like this story can't wait for the next update. Somehow I am thinking she didn't lose the baby and it is Harry's....



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.07.06 - 11:30AM Title: Chapter 11 Broken

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Hmmm. I look forward to learning I am not sure about Ginny in all of this. The fact that you have already told us that she essentially never spoke to Harry again makes you wonder why he is so forgiving and why he blames himself.




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