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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.09.24 - 04:37AM Title: Chapter 12 Father's Day
Good for harry...he's got to get through to her!
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2014.07.11 - 09:03AM Title: Chapter 12 Father's Day
This the first time I am reading you story and I have to say I love it. I am dying to find out about Ginny's year at Hogwarts. I mean it is obvious just by the picture alone how horrible it was but I still want to know. Plus, with the way the book always said how bad Death Eaters are it just doesn't make sense that they weren't tortured and or raped. I think most people would just prefer to not think like that. They just seem to forget that Snape couldn't always protect them it would give everything away. You also have to remember that Ginny was and is a beautiful pure blood that they would feel needed to learn her lessons.
I can't picture Death Eaters raping muggle horns since they think they are filth that she shouldn't touch.
This was also a very good example of how Hermione's nosey nature could get her in trouble. She was always far to nosey for me. Not to mention she always has to be right and wouldn't believe Harry when she needed to like with Draco their 6th year.
I personally loved Ginny and the twins and wished they had more parts in the books.
Anyway I can't wait to read your next chapter!:-)
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.07.09 - 10:14PM Title: Chapter 12 Father's Day
I am really enjoy reading this story.
There is one problem, though. When Harry is sitting with Sam in the garden, Teddy and Tori leave and meet their fathers and go in the shed. Then you say that Remus was at home recovering from the full moon the night before.
Also, Sam follows Charlie into the house when he arrives and tells Ginny that Uncle Charlie has arrived from 'Mania... Then you say that Sam is sitting on Arthur's knee, watching and explaining the movie being shown in his shed.
How can Sam be in two places at once?
Apart from these, this is a great story and I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Ooh, good pick up, thank you, I have gone back and changed that
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.07.08 - 10:42AM Title: Chapter 12 Father's Day
It really is a doomed relationship.
Author's Response: C'mon, it's Harry and Ginny! LOL
