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Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2014.09.24 - 07:50AM
Title: Chapter 18 St Mungo's
At least they hopefully know what they're dealing with now, what a creep and mental case!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2014.07.29 - 10:41AM
Title: Chapter 18 St Mungo's
Great chapter.
I still say that Lucius is a sicko!
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Birlan Signed
Date: 2014.07.28 - 09:28PM
Title: Chapter 18 St Mungo's
Interesting chapter. So at this point in the story, Harry knows that Luxius has a fixation on GInny and that Ginny was kidnapped to Malfoy Manor but he hasn't asked her about how she was kidnapped, how she escaped or anything else that she could tell him that might help him to protect her and find Lucius. Its one thing to be scared of Ginny turning on him again like she did once before but isn't he screwing up on his job by his not asking her questions. Why hasn't someone called him on it?
Heck, he hasn't really asked for any truths about Draco and why Ginny trusts him, even though that also impacts on the job he is supposed to be doing.
Is Harry so scared of Ginny, or so desparate for her affection that he won't do his job, he will crawl back blaming himself for her dumping him, accept her dating Draco to taunt him, and will accept her child as if it was his without ever asking any quesitons about why or how Ginny had Sam, who has parental rights over Sam (which is also another professional failing and a personal one), or why Ginny abandoned Sam in Australia, or why Ginny without telling Harry anything, pre-programmed Sam to look to Harry for protection if she ever needed it.
Is Harry a lousy Auror all the time or only when Ginny is around him. I realize he is the hero of the story and suspect he will be heroic in chapters to come but I hope he gets smarter and not just heroic in chapters to come.
Author's Response: You have brought up a lot of valid points that I admit, as my first ever story, I have overlooked, and I do thank you for that. I am going to go back and look at some earlier chapters to see if I can incorporate some 'Harry questioning Ginny' without it changing too much of the story. I definitely think I write the fluff stuff better so think I'll stick with that in future. Ginny a explanation for EVERYTHING is coming up in a couple of chapters, and that goes for 3 chapters alone! Appreciate your reviews, thanks for reading
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed
Date: 2014.07.27 - 09:16PM
Title: Chapter 18 St Mungo's
Really good chapter. I hope you update soon, I really want to read more about Lucius' obsession with Ginny. Like does Harry know he portkeyed her to Malfoy Manor during her sixth year? Does he know Draco dad used crucio on him for helping her escape before he got back? Harry still doesn't know too much about Ginny's life and it would be great to have learn more.
Author's Response: Thanks to update more frequently now FL is done. Harry doesn't know much at all about Ginnys year, or anything to do with her being at Malfoy Manor
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed
Date: 2014.07.27 - 08:17PM
Title: Chapter 18 St Mungo's
Wow, a little scary. Maybe the Aurors should be back on duty.
Reviewer: Marinka Signed
Date: 2014.07.27 - 07:40PM
Title: Chapter 18 St Mungo's
I still wish you would tell us a bit more about talk that Harry had with Cho at the ball about her pregnancy, why did she cry and why her friend was really nasty to Harry? You have built that up quite a bit but we have hardly seen what has happened. Or are you planning to explain all later?
You would think that harry and Ginny still can talk with Sam in bed, just cast the silencing spell and talk while she is sleeping?
Author's Response: Let's just put Cho crying down to hormones, and her friend was nasty to Harry because he pretty much ignored her most of the night. Cho is now finished in a Power, and we'll move on to Ginnys past, which involves Lucius
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