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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.07.31 - 04:10AM Title: A Birthday Surprise
Great chapter.
I'm glad Ginny's birthday was a happy day for all of them... That is until the dementors attack.
Harry doesn't seem as clueless as he once was.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I think most teenagers start to get a clue at 16--and Harry's got a little extra help to get his brain working, anyway. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.07.30 - 05:37PM Title: A Birthday Surprise
Glad to see that Ginny had a Greta birthday and that Harry did the right thing with the present but not so much with the attack....kutgw
Author's Response: Yea, he almost made a mess of the attack, didn't he? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2014.07.30 - 03:43PM Title: A Birthday Surprise
Well done, I was hoping the G would see Dean with someone else while they were in London (why else she has not heard from him in two weeks - unless he's dead.......) but I think I prefer the slow build your on
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the slow build, because I'm not taking any shortcuts with these two. I have a feeling they will fall in love long before they actually "get together." It has just made more sense to do it that way as I've been writing. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.07.29 - 11:01PM Title: A Birthday Surprise
Some fun scenes with Harry and Ginny. It looks like Harry is beginning to take notice of Ginny? What's going to come of that, I wonder? And what about Dean? Looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed that development. It will take a backseat in the next chapter, but it will generally be very prominent in every chapter of this story. Thanks for the review!
